This story starts off very strong and is very entertaining.. but it becomes a drag later on, the author being very obvious about simply dragging the storyline out for as long as possible once it became successful.. Can't finish reading it.. and it probably will drag on with a lot more nothing happening for another 3 years of chapters or so.
Style score: Put down because of the terrible dialogue, with the same character speaking again in the next paragraph with a new set of quotation marks, making it hard to know which character is actually speaking.
Story score: Started off decently enough, then the main character's power level goes off to stupidly high proportions. Overpowered main characters are not interesting.
Grammar score: Didn't notice any bad grammar, really.
Story score: Again, overpowered characters pretty much make the story non existent.
First book was a decent read but not good enough to bother actually spending money on at amazon for the rest of this second book.