Tschallacka

Tschallacka

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    1. Re: Need help proofreading

      Chapter 1.  A couple of notes from the first paragraph:      only bed and closet for furniture. Inside the bathroom were sink, shower, and toiler made of wood. The cold water on his face woke him (...)


    2. Re: Need help with proofreading and editing

      Should I post comments under individual chapters or here? For example, the intro of your first chapter already has several style problem, that you switch past tense with present tense and such. (...)