It is funy, good system, natural character, litrpg and DRAGON
What do you want more? For me it is 5 star and i like what i read
Ok so the mc is in a tuto where he respawn and is 0.01% more powerful each time he die.
The respawn take 10 sec and the tuto take 6 month.
So it is expotential and after a month of doing just that he would be so powerful he would have hard time killing himself, he would be 180 447 206 359 more powerful in the most ideal situation and he would only have to die 259 200 times. 1.0001^259 200
So superman power for death and being a maso...
Else good luck with the story
Edit: After review chapter
Ok so if your stat is 100 = 100 increased by 0.01% = 0.01 it is 1% that is a 1
but if you re die it is now 101 increased by 0.01% = 0.0101
So it is expotentiel. You start at 1 and each times you die you multiply the number by 1.0001 if 1 = 100% and 0.01% = 0.0001 OK?
30(jour)*24(heure)*60(minute)*60(seconde) = 2592000 mois en seconde
Respawn time is 10 sec so 2592000/10 = 259200(number of death in the most ideal situation)
So his to calculate his final power you do 1.0001 Exponential number of death so
1.0001^259200 = 180 447 206 359
So don't "review" things if you don't understand everything.
Ps: I tought the mc would use this exploit and it would be crack after tutorial but to think the author didn't even see it...
Else i can't not put rating in my review, your mc started by dying more than 100 times is why i tought you would use the exploit.
So we start the story and the guy is a genius idiot who want to use magic. When you lv up you gain a number of point and where it go depend of what you do.
You can put it in body, mind or in a skill that can go as hight as your body or mind depending of if it is a physical or mental. But the number of point you gain each lv up is dependant of mind so all the other attribute are trash if you want to go hight lv.
body and mind also have 3 sub attribute that do noting that you can put point on, but you lose these point because you could alway train these attribute to the same number as the over attribute. You can also put many point on skill.
The system is unbalanced you shoud not have sub attribute or can't put point in it. Also, you should give a gain to put point to body because those that put point in mind at the start could beat warrior just because of the inflation of point.
Solution create attribute point and skill point. Give one for body one for mind and you have a more balanced game.
The mc have plot armor, mage build that figth short range and win(proof that body is useless). He is a jack of all trade but not realy, take physical skill, don't train mind skill, don't train sub attribute for mind. Have many skills that don't synergise but still kill adult noproblemo.
This is another problem, other are stupid to make the mc intelligent.
Even with this this is an enjoyable story, but where is it going? Apart from one cheat he has(that come from nowhere) nothing distinguish the mc from another.
Ok, it is good but the mc is over confident and think he is supérior to any person
He learn wandless magic and do spell with intent alone, but when he get a want, he use it to oblivate people even if he have the trace and people can see whit a spell the spell you used with a wand.
When he go to ollivander he ask for the brother wand...
How can you be more suspitious?
He talk serpent to make spell to show off.
Constantly use shroud in class.
Don't go sleep in his dorm.
Threatening the rune professor to teach him.
It could be great but the stupidity of the mc and being evil for no reason and the fact he is not punished for it because the others are also stupid make it bad.
voldemor at least pretended to be a good boy in hogward and has the excuse of being less than half souled to his stupidity.
But there is originality in the story and it was nice to see the munchkin to power.
I love story of total war and this story is the embodiment of it.
The mc learn and do error, even better, his ennemi learn.
Necro army vs human can we evolve to beat them?
No cheat skill
No god that help you
No japanese stupidity
No talk with the system to explain you the world
No demon king yet
No bad guy that attack the mc for no reason
I think it will be the best Portal Fantasy i ever read if it don't stop
1. my eyes hurt
2. omnipotent system talk to the mc... why?
3. gary stu rich kid that was trained from young age by x teachers, was super intelligent and bla bla bla
Did he have any friend? His life is baby, train, have system and be op because of training.
How his past life will influence his future arrogant because of being a genius and rich? no
What is important for him? Being rich? Respect? What type of genius is he? Think outside of the box? Real use genius? Genius that resolve all thing but don't know how to make use of it? or texbook genius that can only respond to texbook question?
The problem with this story from what i read is that it is superficial:
EX: i want to make a op mc in litrpg... for him to be op he have to be op before so i make him the best he can be for the apocalips so you make his past so he can be what you want instead of the past making him what he will be.
Ps: I hope this review help, this is subjective so others can have different view of the same story
<"Yes, Ma'am. Right away, Ma'am." I jump up and bring my fist to my chest in salute.
"You're out of uniform, soldier." She plays along with my antics.>ch5
The guy is isekai in that world and say he lived in the wood all his life and the girl is from that world of fantasy.
So ho does she know of military? Why don't she question his knowledge of military when he lived in the wood? She should say armor not uniform.
The focus is pick up girl and the rest suffer. The system don't show his stats, his choice for reincarnation or what his skill or their level do. So the author can do a deus ex machina, i alway had this skill.
I don't even see the point to make the story a litrpg(only show skill, map and inventory), could buy bag and map, without the system there is just no skill popup
As of ch33
There is a bit of Marie Sue in the mc but...
Magic is done right
Story is interesting
Background story that add dimention to your world
Rate 4.5 in hope you do your best for the rest
The main character in mad and show a new definition to gore where he don't have a sense of reality and think the other are the crasy.
I don't like this type of novel but the author worked hard to create his mc.
Is the wold real? Is everyting happen in his head? Is he realy crasy? Is his girl he?
Caution: reading this is a self torture because what you read in maybe not reality and considering it is just words, it realy is not reality.