Really enjoying the new direction that adds some much needed structure and makes a lot more sense :3 looking forward to where its going!
-Written after chapter 8
Nice little addition to the Kammiverse by the lovely Kathryn
A great story showing what can happen in a superhero world with more problems than just death lasers. Looking forward to seeing it move forward
What can I say that hasnt been said before. Katie manages to write a Kammi-Kettu story that fills you with warm fuzzies all over. Full of lovable characters in an almost slice of life setting, this installment to the universe gives a well earned break from the harsher realities our favorite emerge go through
I thought this looked familar :) Yet another great piece by QuietValerie
Although the use of "not just a game" is a little overdone, the execution and repurcusions of it stunning in this piece
All in all, if you enjoy gamelit (not litrpg) and tg stories where the genderbending isn't played for laughs, you'll love this
Has the exact same plot and abilities from "The wizard world" and "Warlock of the Mages world" with a dark attribute alchemist with-
an ai chip as his cheat. A sketchy and greedy dark academy he learns at, a mentor who somewhat cares for students and the same method of hiding his talent.
If you like kickbutt characters with low EQ this is the story for you! Vaguely reminiscent of "Crossing to the furture" we see a wonderful job of worldbuilding behind the scenes without the over the top exposition or blocks of information dumps. Im greatly looking forward to whats to come. As an aside. The mc is NAMED Gender Bender, this is not the Prince DOING a genderbender.
I loved both the concecpt and the execution.
Anyone who enjoys op/mc novels will like this one even if it sorta lacks harem (several girls, but only one non-platonic)
I would say a bit more foreshadowing with the existance of a tier 8 spell. Maybe some more concrete explainations about spell tiers by incorporating spell tier requirements into mage ranking? Make more of a big deal about his retirement, maybe have it as an emotional convo with Lucy? I you have a 4 year time skip so you could have her come back and visit once, build a stronger emotional bond with Raylor, then have to leave again to add a layer of guilt and expand the character? Idk, it was awesome as is anyway, you do you.
I like what im seeing so far :) Keep up the good work. Just be careful about chapter length and relaease schedules to keep people engaged.
I like the premise, Im just a very turned of by the grammar and spelling issues. The main concern story wise is character growth, we have naive mc turning into brooding edgelord at the start, but will we see any attempts at reconciliation or will it be 24/7 revenge?