The story is interesting, as are the characters. The grammar could use some work, and some chapters seem quite long. A little more explanation of things inside the story would be great as well. So far so good though, keep it up!
The story is pretty interesting, I haven't seen any stories like this in awhile so it's kind of a nostalgia trip. The grammar and descriptions could use some work, but it's pretty early so keep it up!!
I don't read very many Wuxia, but from what I read from this maybe I should. The world and characters are pretty interesting. The grammar could use the work though but all in all, it was fine. Keep at it!