premise : good ol trapped in the new vrmmorpg
uniques : Game system, MC is crippled in real life due to some bad shite, though the current iteration of the game is new MC played the game irl years ago, speaking of years ago the world kinda exploded and stuff and a few thousand years have passed (I think thousand definitly hundred),
clechie : you die in game you die for reels!
thats more or less all the real critique. solid writing. great visualazations and a conflicted for a reason other then just "plot" MC.
in other words this is a very good read and i think it will appeal to many. keep up the awsome stories.
A thrilling and wild ride with believable and relatable characters. That are human (well some are) and actually progress and grow at a reasonable rate. There is a shite ton of profanity and I would not have it any other way. This author is awesome and if I had any money I would love to support them. Keep up this awesome work amigo. Don't let other people's sensabilities cause you to write in a way that is not true to your own style.