I like the way the author decided to go with the story. Original in my opinion. I also enjoy the MC as she is. Have 5 stars.
Edit: The second part of the story when they go into the dimension with the sun and moon empire feels less interesting to me. I feel like the first arc was better. I especially dislike Adam and his character. I also dislike how somethings are hyped up to be super good and then suddenly an enemy appears that can easily beat said thing. Don't get me wrong it's still an interesting story and I'm still reading but there has definitely been a drop in enjoyment for me.
The story is slow paced but well made. I had doubts reading this as it said in the tags reader interactive (which to me often means isekai with lots of fanservice) however after reading I am happy to say that the readers who make choices aren't like that at all.
The style is not for everyone as it is in first person. I personally enjoy third person more but even then I find that I don't dislike or hate the first person view. Let's just say if you stick around it grows on you.
Grammar is well done. (Probably better than my review ) Above the standard quality of royalroad.
Characters are not 1 side of a coin (Meaning they aren't one dimensional.) which is good. The characters also don't spill all their secrets the moment you meet them. A bit of a problem for me was that sometimes it's a bit hard to remember all the names. A glossary would be nice.
All in all. Very enjoyable read if you can get by the first person view.
I feel like this story is so incredibly slow. This is not without reason :P 87 chapters in and the story is still only on day 8.
the Mesmer hunt has also been something of a huge turnoff because the mesmer hunt had been announced like 20+ chapters ago. Like a day seems so incredibly long in this story it's unbelievable.
Sure a story can have long days, But when the day is mostly side characters praising her for her smarts by thinking of something simple they apparantly never tried. :l
Like with the Mesmer blood being attractive for other Mesmers and using it as lure. Sure you may say that only Jade had the skills neccesary for that by using healing and blood magic and her human autonomy knowledge, but then I wonder does nobody experiment in a world with magic? do scientists not exist? Are there no normal doctors or medicine? same with the glass statues filled with light magic. and lighting the stone wall in the library by repeatedly using light magic on it. that all added up made me feel like all people except the mc are total retards unless society just became a thing. which it didn't since there are history books in the story to dispute my claim.
This all adds up to the side characters being extremely abnoxious since they all never have any problems with her. You know the prince of a country for half a day? threaten his friend in front of him while he is eating. Steal his library pass? Sure why not. Demand a better library pass when you need to give it back? That's also fine... maybe not.
I officially quit this story. reading until ch87 (more skimming through it since ch73 or something) Because I finally can't take it anymore.
I shall leave two Pro's at least. This story has great grammar and the very beginning of this story was enjoyable due to the unique way of her special ability. Though my enjoyment for this story is dead now.
This story is brutal at times and I feel like you really start feeling for the mc and other characters which makes those brutal scenes even better. I also really like the mc and her powers. Can't wait for more chapters.
I love Tanya as a character. Same with Lily. 5 Stars for you.
I feel like I own the author a review because I gave such a low rating so here we go.
The style is abysmal at times the fonts change sizes really often. It isn't even that hard to fix. Thats why 1.5 stars.
The story is not bad. But, it is the direction that the story takes after chapter: Small fish, Smaller pond. That I just cannot accept.
The reason for this is because I feel like, that if someone murders part of your family you would kill them no matter what. I absolutely would not make any kind of deal with that person or show any kind of mercy.
The grammar is meh~ Not bad not good. (Not saying I can do better. :P )
Now we come to what made me drop this story.
The chapter: Small fish, Smaller pond.
I'm really triggered that this is even a thing. I just can't imagine someone being like this: 'hmm someone killed a great amount of my family but, she has the ability to give me cores so that my family can grow stronger, Even though she is the reason the colony got weaker to begin with.' ''Let's make a deal!'' this moment ruined the story for me. I already had some problems with the MC's personality. Like why he let's people freeload of him. Or how he has no problem with mindless ants. I can accept this since he has a real family now according to himself. But since he treats them like family I just feel like he cannot accept that deal for the cores. If he didn't treat the ants like his family I would have been fine with this but since he treats them like family, I am not fine with this.
I have never been this critical about a story but for all mentioned reasons above I have decided in giving such a low rating. (such a huge rant.)
Edit: read it again and got past that section. I feel like I should rate higher so :/
I absolutely adore this. (Really small spoiler... Maybe?)
Style... might not be for everyone but that's just how Vesper is and I love it.
Story... I enjoy that too but sometimes the story will be a little too much about how Vesper will get laid with the next person. (i.m.o)
Grammer... mistakes what are they are they tasty?
Character... I just love Vesper and Glitter Kitten (there were some others here but r.i.p?)
My conclusion... This story is like turnip beautiful and ruthless.
The story is nice but, the plot progresses so slow at times. The main reason is because there is a lot of different pov's which do start to get annoying in my opinion.
Like when Yan is being kidnapped. (my favorite mc btw) It's just a bunch of different pov's. Sure it's for character development and to see how the characters respond to it but, it's really starting to get to me that Yan being in the situation herself has a lot less screentime than other characters. (Not saying character development is bad but keep it focused a little more plz.)
I like most characters. Grammar is great.World building is also done pretty good. Just that the pace is too slow.
I love this story but I cringe so hard with some of the interactions Gwen has with some people like Percy. She is way too kind for the annoying shit.
Edit: There is a reason given for this in chapter 214 so have 5 stars.
Also I dislike that some words are in Chinese/Mandarin? like babulya or mao but I won't give you a lower rating for that cuz there are normal swear words in your story. So here have a good rating you deserve it.
If this comes even remotely close to your last story you can't go wrong.
I like it so far but 2 chapters isn't a lot to go on.
Still have 5 stars cuz you finished your last story for now. (Which loads of people don't.)