Caladbolg

Caladbolg

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    1. Re: How to get good initial ratings.

      Interesting piece dripping with tons of sarcasm. Good job.


    2. Re: RoyalRoad#101 - Free Reviews each Sunday.

      Let me hear your thoughts, https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/24594/zjjan-master I'm back with some free time finally. A review done for you, please don't get discouraged by it and try to take it as (...)


    3. Re: RoyalRoad#101 - Free Reviews each Sunday.

      Hah, I had troublesome two weeks and a half and now I want to catch back with writing my own chapters for a bit. Once my free time returns I will definitely go back to this thread and start going from (...)


    4. Re: RoyalRoad#101 - Free Reviews each Sunday.

      I'll leave the next review on wednesday or thursday, some time issues again~


    5. Re: In a Classic Harem Is a Male MC

      Archetype is something that is the standard, so no.


    6. Re: Check My Premise Line (Objective Feedback Please)

      Does it work for you? Do you "see" the whole story or at least get a picture of it? Does it pull you in? Can you see the beginning, middle, and end? Would you write this yourself if you came up with the (...)


    7. Re: Advice to Teenage Writers

      (...) write stuff you absolutely have no interest in, write intentionally poorly-- just do it often, and keep it short enough that you can stew on it without getting too attached. Have fun writing before (...)


    8. Re: Bots on RR?

      Sometimes I feel like an advanced review should be a requirement to leave any kind of a rating on the story... Or at least split the ratings into the ones from reviews and the ones from just one click. (...)


    9. Re: Bots on RR?

      Perhaps it's just a weird coincidence, but I had the exactly same thing. Got to 4.5 4.6 stars early on, then the mass 0,5 reviews hit. I know my story isn't good enough yet to deserve the 4,5 in overall (...)


    10. Re: Copy Pasted Stories loosing formating.

      Weird? It always works for me, hell it even worked today in the morgning. Maybe the new version of word is the problem here? I always was wary before upgrading anything of Microsoft's.


    11. Re: RoyalRoad#101 - Free Reviews each Sunday.

      As a heads up, I had a busier sunday than I expected, and I want to read deeper into the first story from the thread, so I'll send the review somewhere tomorrow in the morning or in the early afternoon.


    12. Re: Do I have a world building problem?

      Hm, you're right. I was too subjective in my response and only considered my own experience, maybe OP is the type that needs thorough preparations to write. I truly don't spend much time writing down my (...)


    13. Re: Do I have a world building problem?

      60-200 pages of worldbuilding is nothing short of excessive as far as my perception goes. What would you even include there to make it 60-pages long, much less 200? I really would like to know, maybe I'm (...)


    14. Re: Do I have a world building problem?

      I wanted to reply in a nice way with quotations, but I'm too lazy to do it so I will just do simple old quoting with " " "No, even if it is your thousandths it wouldn't be perfect. Some details would (...)


    15. Re: RoyalRoad#101 - Free Reviews each Sunday.

      Hey! I'm looking for stories to review. Leave a link to your story and expect me to leave a review on Sunday. I'll review at least 1 story, starting from the earliest that appear here, on each Sunday. (...)


    16. Re: Should I merge my chapters to make them longer?

      I personally wouldn't read chapters that are 300-600 words because I simply wouldn't be able to get immersed into the story and whoom, gotta click next chapter again. Even 600-900 words seem way too short (...)


    17. Re: Do I have a world building problem?

      It is possible to have a 'well-functioning world', but only if it's not your first story. Demanding one's first creation to be perfectly internally consistent is not a realistic standard. However, once (...)


    18. Re: How do i get followers

      Find an artist and pay him/her for making  it, most usually ;p



    19. Re: Quick Help With Some Motivation

      Okay, now we are gettin somewhere - you brough up 'a character they will love to hate', and you also said that you want a legit reason for the soldier to hate - not just dislike - the MC. So, while you (...)