I enjoyed reading this fanfic, and looking forward to more. The beginning was a bit hard to read, as I felt some of the sentences and explanations were a bit "awkward," and didn't flow naturally, but I've noticed that over the chapters, the author has improved dramatically, and it's well worth it to keep reading on. MC's behavior was a bit irrational, but this was explained later, so thank you for that (otherwise I would've rated story a bit lower..)
Thank you for taking the time to write this. I greatly enjoy the pace of the story and the world. MC's personality doesn't resonant with me, but I enjoy his interaction nevertheless, as it's expertly thought out. Definitely an enjoyable read. I couldn't help but devour the first one and a half volumes in one sitting!