SamJellyFish

SamJellyFish

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    1. Re: Someone help me about reviews?

      If you got some readers but they gave up at some point in your without commenting what the wrong with your story what you will do? is there anyone here can do reviews for the chapters that got down in (...)


    2. RE: I need your advice in my story please

      As far as plot-building goes, in my experience there are two basic ways you should operate. The first option is to write your story with enough detail that readers can understand the world and the characters (...)


    3. Review a scene for me please?

      Hello everyone please I want someone to review a scene for me well this scene in chapter (15) called The Pale King  of my story The Silver Sabertooth , the final scene between a king and the main character (...)


    4. RE: I need your advice in my story please

      Sams unite! So my problem isn't necessarily that your hero's arc is disturbing--a former hero turned to the dark side by personal tragedy is classic, and shouldn't turn anyone off necessarily. The (...)


    5. RE: Need some ideas and thoughts about a Fanfiction story to make soon

      Well, you could start by doing some research. You see, characters from a multi-million dollar franchise normally have their own army of writers who gives them backstories already. Batman for example, (...)


    6. RE: Need some ideas and thoughts about a Fanfiction story to make soon

      hmmm, well personally speaking I am already a graduate of the whole cowabunga thing, but try it out and see where it goes. Draft a few chapters in your notepad and after that, you will have a guess if (...)


    7. Need some ideas and thoughts about a Fanfiction story to make soon

      Hello everyone like you read in the title! I want some advice and suggestion about a new story ok to make it short here is what it's about... Since I'm young I watched a lot of fo cartoons and animes (...)


    8. RE: I need your advice in my story please

      Hello, everyone, it's me, Sam... Well, my issues that since I started writing a story called the Silver Sabertooth (maybe some of you heard about it here) however I got problem, with my readers which (...)


    9. RE: Who have tough heart?

      Hey mate. I'm taking a look at your entire story. Here is something to look into if you feel like it: The first chapter is pretty much only exposition. It's not interesting and it kills my mood (...)


    10. RE: I need your advice in my story please

      Twist and action need a reason - the devils are in the details, why he did. But you can't tell, you need to show why. - a character can't just flip from good-natured to a child killer for no reason. (...)


    11. RE: Lost my followers?

      Things I learn - you can't satisfy everybody. read the top books, learn from them - read more top stories - learn that's what I do. Being unique helps too. There's too much of the isekai, (...)


    12. RE: I need your advice in my story please

      I don't know if this will help you, but my advice would to just continue writing. In an early part of my story the MC is told "No matter what situation you are in, do not think that the world will be (...)


    13. I need your advice in my story please

      Hello, everyone, it's me, Sam... Well, my issues that since I started writing a story called the Silver Sabertooth (maybe some of you heard about it here) however I got problem, with my readers which (...)


    14. RE: Lost my followers?

      The problem is most of them dislike it because the way of it and they don't like the disturbance and plot twists as it seems because in my story the silver sabertooth, it has many disturbance moments (...)


    15. RE: Lost my followers?

      I think it's more like several readers followed your story because they initially thought it was interesting, but after a while they found that it wasn't their type, so they un-followed it. I wouldn't (...)


    16. Lost my followers?

      Hey, guys, I've been writing for a while here and I noticed for some reason some followers of my stories just disappeared so what I have to do to regain them again and keep the others? any ideas?


    17. Who have tough heart?

      Who can review my story The Silver Sabertooth? and see how is it in gore and violence  I making there? I already wrote a gore scene in chapter 3 and chapter 4 will be with full of epic but gore so I want (...)


    18. The Silver Sabertooth

      https://a.wattpad.com/cover/97184289-256-k154112.jpg meet Zeral, the only creature with no heart while humans and even monster have but why? Summary: "I want to die, please can you kill me? you (...)


    19. RE: Help about cover

      Hello, Can you post the image here? so that I can try uploading it and see what the issue is? Note: Please open a support ticket https://royalroadl.com/support http://i.imgur.com/OskO3Wo.png


    20. Help about cover

      Hi guys at my story The Silver Sabertooth I made my own cover to the novel but it won't be able to be place when I uploaded it, I tried change the size and type but no effect :'( please someone help me (...)