Nice MC, daily life at its best, persons with some kind of character and I really need to know where this is leading, that s the best. Try it, it's good!
Great story line, great characterisation u really did it, after ur good to read stories before. Story is really profound and deep. Finally u manage whoven relationships, in my opinion the strong point of this story and should be the strong point of every story. For me till now ur masterpiece. Thank u
Its one of the best here, so i wait fir the next chapters ;)
Keep on, its good, easy to read, no op, nice characterisation