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Puppychow

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    1. Re: In need of feedbacks from a different perspective of my own

      I also want to add that, speaking as a published author on Amazon, your book description is boring and tells me very little.  It's too generic.  Also, as Hammie pointed out, you mix present and past tenses (...)


    2. Re: In need of feedbacks from a different perspective of my own

      I took a glance at the first page of the writing, and I agree with Hammie that your writing needs a lot of work.  In the opening paragraph, you use a lot of sentence fragments, which grammar nazis will (...)


    3. Re: In need of feedbacks from a different perspective of my own

      Just want to make a comment on your book cover.  The words are barely legible because of placement (for the byline) and color (book title).  I would drop the byline to the bottom.  As for the book title, (...)


    4. Re: ROYAL ROAD APP?

      Apps cost a ton of money to develop and then maintain.  Give RRL time to find the right developer(s) and to negotiate.  


    5. Re: LitRPG Guide. What makes a good LitRPG

      To me, what matters most is the narrative.  Who's your main character and why?  What makes the MC relatable to the reader?  And why should we care? The gaming system, the world setting, etc., is background (...)


    6. RE: Legality of images for book cover design

      Sorry for the late post. Came across this thread through a google search for a related topic. I use dreamstime images for my works published on Amazon Kindle, so I have some experience with this. For (...)


    7. RE: Be careful with other posting sites (for writers that want to publish)

      I want to go slightly off topic, and talk more generally about publishing contracts.  A while back, a best selling author in military sci fi genre wrote about an offer that he received from a major publisher. (...)


    8. RE: Be careful with other posting sites (for writers that want to publish)

      I personally believe the staff of Inkitt has the best intentions, they may just be naive about what some of us writers experience on the greater 'net. Just want to comment on this (...)