I just love this book a lot. So I'll be leaving an advanced review, which boils down to "Read this, read this now."
Style: I'm certainly not picky when it comes to writing styles, although there have been some pretty dry ones that I've put down. This is nowhere near those. Its full of interesting things, plenty of action, plenty of introspection and world development, which is at the pace of the main character and not just thrown in there as stuff Elaine doesn't know yet. I've quite enjoyed it.
Story: Excellent. A great story, an epic if you will, about a transliterated soul to a new world. There are plenty of things I didn't want to happen that did happen, but they make Elaine who she is, and who am I to argue with another's vision? Simply put, the story is worth reading, well written, and so worth every second of the 13 hours or so I spent reading it today.
Grammar: Not much to say here. I spotted a few errors, but not many. Not enough to pull me out of the story, and definitely not enough for less than 5 stars at your editing.
Character: I love the characters. I love the little bits, like Elaine loving mangoes(not really a spoiler), and her mom's spoon attack skills. The main character is the most in depth, but all the characters have fleshed out a good bit over the time I've spent reading about them today. I can only expect more, and better content as I go along following this story for the rest of it's life.
In essence, I'm both very frustrated and very relieved. Frustrated that I didn't start reading sooner, as I've seen the book on my kindle a few times, but it seemed a little out of my tastes so I didn't read it. Relieved because I didn't have to wait for all the cliffhangers you'll hopefully not have to look forward to presently.
Selkie Myth, I love this series. Keep writing. I want nothing more right now than to explore the worlds of the dwarves in Pallos.
This is an amazing book so far. I have no complaints whatsoever. The story really pulls you in, the system is well fleshed out. It really is quite epic watching Randidly go. Excellent.
I'm loving this series. Please write more as soon as possible because I'm starving.
Such a good series. i heard we were getting new chapters soon! keep uo the good work, Ed