So far I have only read the prolouge - which was the most amazing thing I have ever read as a prolouge to a VRMMORPG story, it did still have the same "training to be superb" feel of it but that I don't mind much since he didn't train in weapons or martial arts but standard sport!
The story is brilliant, well written and captivating! There are only a few minor grammatical errors which is easily overlooked but still interrupts the story slightly. The character is missing a few holes but I think they will be filled in later on as the story progresses but so far he seems a bit too over qualified (if you ask me) in everything but the (WARNING: SLIGHT SPOILER, MAYBE) end part (not going to spoil anything) makes up for it. Though still I'm only putting a 7/10 in character.
Continue the brilliant work mate! I'll be reading when you're posting ;)
This is a very good fiction, and I really enjoy the feel it is giving. What I really like about it is that you give a reason to as why there is an interface screen instead of using the “game-like world” excuse.
I will be looking forward to the next chapter!
Keep up the good work mate!