Moridain

Moridain

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Life in New World (LNW)
An interesting take on VRMMO. The main character is effectively stuck inside the game, since his body is no longer a pleasant place to stay. The pace is a bit slow, but in a comfortable way. The character has no overpowered skills, instead he is putting time and effort into developing his fundamentals, which should make him stronger than others in the future.

Master of All, Jack of None
Not all heroes need to be superhumanly strong warriors.   The main hero spent much of his life in hospital, and now finds himself playing a VRMMO as a crafting class. While other smight find it boring, he finds all the mundane tasks fantastic after being unable to do them in real life. His earnest joy of life and sincerity are heartwarming. I am holding back 1/2 a star only because some of the characters are a bit cliche, in particular the other players who gained class rewards. This kind of thing usually improves with writing experience though, and if it does I will edit. :)

Immortal Soul
Very well written story with interesting characters. I am slightly horrified at the cruel fate of the protagonist, his free will effectively gone and his soul never allowed to find peace in oblivion.   /shudder