FoundForester
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Re: promote your story with 3 word sentences!
Dies a villain, gets a second chance, tries to Die A Hero. Hmmm...What about the part where you where supposed to use three word sentences? (Not that I dislike your story's premiss, only your rule following.) (...)
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Re: promote your story with 3 word sentences!
Dies a villain, gets a second chance, tries to Die A Hero. Hmmm...What about the part where you where supposed to use three word sentences? (Not that I dislike your story's premiss, only your rule following.) (...)
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Re: The author who inspired me to write in RR is reading my story
That's so wholesome I think I'm gonna be sick! We've really gotta put some kind of warning on this! I might overdose!
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Re: Need help nailing down my MC's view on killing people
This is just the Batman debate reformed. Batman refuses to kill for moral reasons, so he keeps catching the Joker. Then inevitably the Joker breaks out and kills huge swaths of people. Is Batman morally (...)
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Re: promote your story with 3 word sentences!
Dies a villain, gets second chance, dies A Hero.
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Re: Review Swap - Up to Five Chapters
I'm down for a trade, Don't have many chapters posted yet, so five is fine with me. Lemme know what you think
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Re: 100 Followers!!!
100 followers is HYPE! Keep it up!
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Re: Any advice on this prologue?
Generally the sentence structure is a bit clunky and word choice is a little repetitive at timed. for example The boy hurriedly proceeded to receive the sword, but upon receiving it, the sword plummeted (...)
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Re: Rising Stars after 3 weeks!
That's sick! Keep it up!
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Re: Promote your story by sharing a simple sentance that foreshadowed something major in the story (SPOILER WA(...)
"There is no such thing as good men! And heroes—they’re just monsters that hide their fangs, blades soaked a different shade of red!”
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Re: New writer here
Before you post a chapter, read it again. Out loud. It's a little tedious, but it's a good way to catch grammar mistakes and sentences that don't make as much sense as they should. Or you could cheat (...)
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Re: 1k Celebration!
1k Views is big! I can't wait until you get to 10k!
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Re: Does this sound like a slow start to you?
If I'm understand you correctly, I think we open our fictions in a similar way. Big fight -> loss -> Isekai'd (due to loss)-> blue box. Personally I'm always a fan of explosive openings because (...)
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Re: Words that defeat you
For me its the word And I use it way, way, way to much and I'm always finding it where it doesn't belong and it's really annoying.
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Re: Celebrating an early milestone-- user interaction with my ongoing fiction
Those are some pretty good numbers! I'm sure if you keep righting you'll do great!
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Re: Reached 4,000 views on my first LitRPG!
Hype! 4k is a pretty big milestone! You'll be at 10k before you know it! Keep it up
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Re: A good start!
Sick! I hope your story blows up!
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Re: Open For 5 Chapter Review Swaps (+Mentions)
Howdy, Both our stories only have 5 chapters so far so it seemed like a perfect match to me. The Book I offer is the only one I got so far Nobody Dies A Hero, A Isekai LitRPG that is slowing becoming (...)
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Re: 100 pages!
Congrats! I'm half way there myself! Keep it up!
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Re: Review Swap for Tolkien-style Epic Fantasy
I think reading up to end of the first book or maybe halfway should be enough to get an overall feel for the story. First book is around 60k-70k words. For me, I'm open to most type of stories, but (...)
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