Thall230

Thall230

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My Martial Spirit is System

Not bad at all just gotta get past that the author is not writing in their native language. Other than that it's a fun read. Especially if you like the idea of a cultivator having a system that threatens to kill the mc if he doesn't do what the system wants him to do.


Evolutionary Prison

Needs work but is a enjoyable read.

Needs work but is an enjoyable read with almost nonstop action, a little bit of sexy time, awesome imaginative monsters, and mindfuckery.


Shovels In Spades

Five stars for now will redo this if I remember to but I'm pretty sure it's going to stay a five anyways. Yes I think it's going to be that good. Edit: yep knew it was going to stay five stars 😂


RE: Young Master

Loving this story please keep up the good work.


Layers of Hell

Loving it so far. Keep up the good work. I like the characters and the world building, I'm trying to think of something I don't like about this story and I'm drawing a blank.


Arnar the Dungeon

Good story. Just have to flesh out your characters a bit more and work on the grammar. That's all I really have to say about that but I have to keep adding words to fit the amount needed for the review to be accepted. Really good story, and I can only see it getting better. Anyways yeah give it a read.


World Keeper

 Loving this story😍 the moment you are done with this rough draft and you publish it I'm buying it. I think a lot of people don't realise that quite a few of these stories on rrl are rough drafts and should be read with that in mind.


Unknown Son

This story reals you right in. I honestly couldn't stop myself from reading. I'm not saying it's perfect, but it's not that far off. So come on people you really need to read this book cause once you start you won't want it to end.


Fantasia

Makes me smile and I don't even know I'm smiling!!

Not doing some long review, just read the authors story and don’t be whiny about the parenthetical narrator, if it pulls you out of the story then you have the concentration of a goldfish. Anyway to make a long story short, it’s completely one hundred percent worth it.