wut? its so boring i couldnt handle past chapter 10..
it really goddamn slow and boring i god fed up skipping chapters.. if you want te entire 10 chapter can be compress up until chapter 2.. but its full of useless crap.. im done
im dropping this one.. this is a complete bullshit of a novel.. its feels ike reading a nonsense of elementary schooler.. wew.. just wew.. full of illogical nonsense.. not worth a time.
mc is a naive idiot who i cant even explain if there is sonething wrong with him just that.. otherwise it interesting.. but the mc fucking destroyed it all
just as i said, its just a bunch bullshits with no clear plot whatsoever, it reminds me of invisible dragon though, or maybe invisible dragon is better than this one.
this thing needs a complete rewrite
what should i say?
well its not on my taste, i dont even know what to enjoy about this story, so far its nothing but power up, torture, kill , slaughter.. really, there is no plot whatsoever...
although, i have nothing against gore and the like but this one is just nothing but gore, i had read few gory story before like summoned slaughterer and few others but i actually enjoyed them unlike this one...
actually, everything else about it is decent, just that it lack solid plot and characters
at first its good but became overly stupid as fuck, the mc is overly stupid as insect, although i know that mc is newborn but he at least have a mind,, and was granted a liitle bit of gods knowledge. but no.. he still act like mutt. just continue to do illogical shit.. and story is, full of plotholes so the entire novel is a joke,,
i really love this one. i cant wait for the next update
the author is clearly irresponsible, sigh. what a disappointment, just becoz he said "hes bored" , he decided to ruined his own story and trolled it. just another run a mill author.
its great.. just a little lacking.. i cant tell whats lacking though.. just that my motivation disappeared somewhere.. maybe ill read it later
its good but plain boring for me so i dropped at at chapter 20... the plot is good , comcept is good too.. but its clearly lacking about characters.. they completely plain one dimensional npc.. very swallow .. about the dialogue though .. it relied on characters so it needs improvement.. overall ill give it 3.5
well .. what can i say.. since its your wish fulfillment . i cant really do anything.. everyone have their own ideals and wish... but this wish of yours.. the words that cameto mind is " debauchery " ..
i quit.. its so boring.. its really moshoku tensei.. with extremely long childhood period..