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    1. Re: help with dialogues

      Ofcourse it was! Well just know that i did this mainly for myself and i did not want to come across as a doush in doing so! But this will be something i screw up myself without ever noticing, so i try (...)


    2. Re: help with dialogues

      I just realised how i phrased that.... I obviously meant that I MYSELF want to internalize it... Not you or him. ME. thats why i wrote the text. But yet again rereading my own text 20 mins later showed (...)


    3. Re: help with dialogues

      “Good job, that question isn’t a drag. Though I guess answering it will be,” he sighed like he was about to have to undergo heavy labor or an annoying task. I'm so sorry for this but i want to reply (...)


    4. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      Funny thing, your last paragraph is something i completly obliterated with my second chapter. With a 350 word count explanation of cultivation in a mass produced book. I know it will scare people off but (...)


    5. Tables and system messages on royalroad

      Sup again guys. Im currently doing an editors job and read my novel on my phone(WHICH IS COMPLETLY DIFFRENT IF YOU ONLY READ ON YOUR PHONE!!!!!!) trying to see it from a different perspective and fix a (...)


    6. Help on grammar and enjoyable writing.

      After a year of reading hundreds of novels and always daydreaming about my own story, I finally got the courage to write my own novel! I have been writing for a week now, and although I am German and (...)


    7. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      Do you have a core or a batter of sorts to store prana or is it, idk, in the body constantly passively cycling around? Either way you can use this to improve on your capacity, usage speed and maybe more (...)


    8. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      Ah ok so if you had unlimited prana you had godlike levels of powers with your tokens. I see the problem, think it would be cool to add another use for prana. Not mainly connected to the tokens but also (...)


    9. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      So this sounds like "Prana" or in a more general term mana or the energy in your power system works as a fuel for tokens or abilities. Are tokens just spells or techniques that someone can learn or are (...)