Mockwell
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Re: Openings for review swaps (0/5) willing to review first 10k or 20k of your story
I’m keen too. I’m pretty slow, probably take me 3 weeks for a review, but if you’re okay with that? I’d give feedback on overall feel, character feel, pace and I’ll pm you “exit points”. (...)
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Re: Openings for review swaps (0/5) willing to review first 10k or 20k of your story
I’m keen too. I’m pretty slow, probably take me 3 weeks for a review, but if you’re okay with that? I’d give feedback on overall feel, character feel, pace and I’ll pm you “exit points”. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/57356/save-crystal-the-opening-game (...)
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Re: Openings for review swaps (0/5) willing to review first 10k or 20k of your story
I’m keen too. I’m pretty slow, probably take me 3 weeks for a review, but if you’re okay with that? I’d give feedback on overall feel, character feel, pace and I’ll pm you “exit points”. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/57356/save-crystal-the-opening-game (...)
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Re: As a non-adventurer what does your LitRPG day look like?
If I was crafting, I'd be trying to figure out if it's Firesday or not and if the moon is in the right alignment for my HQ craft to succeed. Seeing as Bastok was my starting city state, I'd probably (...)
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As a non-adventurer what does your LitRPG day look like?
I got a question… If FFXI became realish and you were transported there from our world, LitRPG style. Let’s say you start in San d'Oria. You have a crafting class (so no Warrior of Black Mage etc.) (...)
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Re: Public stoning requested
That's a bold request. Haha! Edited to add: I dropped a pretty extensive comment on your prologue. I hope that helps! Thanks. I saw that. Appreciate the comment . I have thought it a bit clunky. Thanks. (...)
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Public stoning requested
Hey I’ve kind of finished my first book on RR. I’ve only 1 random review. Would love some feedback. I can’t promise anything in return, as current life has me by the short and curlies, and everything (...)
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Crafting Class Tree - Need Help
Hi all. Trying to think of a cool class tree for Crafting classes. You start at the bottom (that might even be a Gathering class) and you've got to get one or more of the classes to meet the pre-requisites (...)
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How to write npcs?
I want to write my NPCs like they are in-game. Very 2-dimensional. Limited dialogue. That’s easy. But how do I do that and still have meaningful relationships? How do I make these relationships (...)
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Re: How could an NPC prove to a player they are sentient (in an mmo)
In reply Fernicus to https://www.royalroad.com/profile/148458 Something to keep in mind... how does the NPC know they're sentient? How will the players know they are an NPC? Right, read the original (...)
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