SRo-se

SRo-se

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    1. Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews

      *raises hand* If you're still up for it, then I'm in. I'd like to get Method B, it would give me something to reflect upon in my break.  https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/55816/the-winds-bestowed (...)


    2. Re: synopsis help.

      Alright, experimenting a little with your points: A butcher, a beauty, a coroner, and a vagabond walk into a tavern… ... and start a new era. The Butcher: William lives for his family, their (...)


    3. Re: All my chapters are now pre-scheduled

      You're living the dream! Congratulations!


    4. Re: synopsis help.

      @IvyVeritas & @Cymas. First of all, thank you so much for your kind feedback. I took your thoughts into mind and fused them into this:  Stella lives in a cocoon of her own making. She spends her (...)


    5. Re: synopsis help.

      The more I spend thinking about it, yeah, I like the newest one the best, so I'm gonna use it. Are you interested in an in-depth breakdown and proofreading of your new synopsis? I'm asking first because (...)


    6. Re: synopsis help.

      The synopsis is the worst place to try to be mysterious. You're trying to sell the story to your readers so if they can't figure out what your story is about and why they would want to read it, there's (...)


    7. Re: Is my cover any good?

      It looks very good. I'd say you nailed it. 


    8. Re: synopsis help.

      I do love the logline in the original one Ditto! That line is familiar and catchy. I have an affection for old jokes so I just had to incorporated one there.  Finishing the joke might work out (...)


    9. Re: synopsis help.

      The synopsis is the worst place to try to be mysterious. You're trying to sell the story to your readers so if they can't figure out what your story is about and why they would want to read it, there's (...)


    10. Re: Growth

      It's always lovely and motivating to hear from people who keep on going. Your discipline is admirable and honestly, the precursor of any growth a writer wishes to achieve. I'm hoping to achieve something (...)


    11. Re: synopsis help.

      Neither one is really grabbing me, tbh. It's telling me a little bit about the world but nothing about the story or the characters. I do love the logline in the original one, although I would make the (...)


    12. Re: Novels with good characters and cool superpowers

      From my reading list/read later/follows (some of them I read, and some I didn't but sure do sound interesting): https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/57644/the-seventh-spirit https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/55593/order-slayer-modern-litrpg (...)


    13. synopsis help.

      So I've been thinking of changing my story's synopsis to shake things up a little. This is the new one I wrote: This is the end of an era, and the start of a new one. For four years, the Kingdom (...)


    14. Re: *Sighs*

      I understand you perfectly. These days, the thought of taking a hiatus is starting to creep in. Writing is wonderful, but I'm just too exhausted to enjoy it properly. Hope things turn out well for you. (...)


    15. Re: Funniest excerpt from your fiction?

      i'm not sure what is the funniest scene, so here's something from the latest chapter: “What is the meaning of this?” “Arm-wrestling, of course.” “A rock isn’t your arm!” “But I pulled it with (...)


    16. Re: Promote your story by telling us how/why you named it what you named it

      it's a given title. will be mentioned later on. 


    17. Re: Any writer here attempted or has created multiple stories in an interconnected universe

      This is what I'm doing. Having a lot of fun but it's also a lot of work. Same. My story's part of a bigger series with the same power system but different implementations.


    18. Re: 🔨 Constructive First Chapter Feedback 🔨

      thank you for the kind offer, and congratulations on your rs placement! the story is in the sig.


    19. Re: Can I please get some help?

      ignore the rep note i made. i mistook the reps for the levels and thought a single rep will push that 99.98% towards completion.  this is so embarrassing... :DrakanFascinating: