Really glad to see this on RR, read it on Archive of our own ages ago, definitely going to be re-reading it, some people wont like it, but I highly reccomend at least giving it a shot, in my own oppinion its one of the best storie out there.
Loved it, picked it up and binged read the whole thing so far in one sitting, amazing story, nuff said.
I quite liked it, really confused me at first but was pretty much able to piece together what ( I think ) is going on, has got good potential, setting up quite a few option and characters further down the line so its nice that it leaves some speculation as to what could happen. Didn't really have any problems with the grammar, understood everything well enough, I might be a bit biased as I REALLY like dungeon core type stories. Looking forward to where this is going.