Beverlyy

Beverlyy

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    1. Re: Free reviews

      It is impossible to pass up this offer. So if you want to and are bored enough, I invite you to take a look at "The Reincarnation of the Transcendental". So far it has twelve chapters. By the way, also (...)


    2. Re: Time Management, Energy and Writing While Working

      Why don't you write on the weekends? Or whenever you don't have work?


    3. Re: RANK // what determines a story's ranking on RR?

      Ratings and reviews I think. Follows might give slight boost. Viewership no. Faves no. Page count (in a way yes) no. Page count indirectly affects it because the longer a story is the more likely it is (...)


    4. Free reviews [Closed] [Will Review All Inside]

      Will review anyone for absolutely free. Why? Bored. DM FOR DEEPER CRITICISM DONE: Alt41 Snellod - Goddess of Snails The Reincarnation of the Transcendental A New Journey


    5. Re: Is polished english essential in web serial?

      So what do you guys think? Is polished english needed when a author 7 times a week? Or simple does the job when uploading 7 times a week... No. Polished writing in general isn't even necessary so long (...)


    6. Have you ever

      Yeah, me neither. Hello. My name's Beverly. Pleasure to meet you. Might I interest you in a firm handshake or a piece of nonsense?



    7. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      Honestly the part about skimming annoyed me since I spent like 2 hours on it.  Coughs are much louder than you think. It doesn't say "clear his throat." Old people cough pretty damn loud. Not necessarily (...)


    8. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      So I kinda have middle-of-the-road opinions about Chapter 1. It feels unpolished and not in a sort of "you didn't do any editing" way, but instead in a "style over clarity" way. Which, if I'm to assume (...)


    9. Re: How do ya deal with negative reviews?

      I deleted your comment because I figured you were just trolling and didn't bother reading anything else from you, I showed your review to others and they(6) thought you were trolling/being pedantic. And (...)


    10. Re: Caught up Again! Looking for 3-4 swaps.

      Sure thing. I can review your work.  Sure, What's your post schedule like, do you want me to wait for a few more to come out? I'll have 10k tomorrow. You can comment up to then if you like. 


    11. Re: Caught up Again! Looking for 3-4 swaps.

      Sure thing. I can review your work. 


    12. Re: How do ya deal with negative reviews?

      I just want to put it out there that my review and comments weren't made out of malice.  The reason I made the review was because the poster asked for one. I spent about an hour and a half going through (...)


    13. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      So I kinda have middle-of-the-road opinions about Chapter 1. It feels unpolished and not in a sort of "you didn't do any editing" way, but instead in a "style over clarity" way. Which, if I'm to assume (...)


    14. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      So I kinda have middle-of-the-road opinions about Chapter 1. It feels unpolished and not in a sort of "you didn't do any editing" way, but instead in a "style over clarity" way. Which, if I'm to assume (...)


    15. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      So I kinda have middle-of-the-road opinions about Chapter 1. It feels unpolished and not in a sort of "you didn't do any editing" way, but instead in a "style over clarity" way. Which, if I'm to assume (...)


    16. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Alright. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/54495/system-overclock