DeimosRobertson

DeimosRobertson

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    1. Re: Weather

      This one starts in a downpour that turns into a heavy drizzle, then a light sprinkle as the sky clears and the sun blows up. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/53929/nova-interitus


    2. Re: How do ya deal with negative reviews?

      This is great thread. I agree that most of us are here to get our work read and get some feedback. So much of what's been said is spot on. Even if you want to turn off that stuff and ignore the reviews. (...)


    3. Start wtih 2.1 instead & tell me your thoughts!

      I have a long way to go in releasing this story. It's overtly heavy, but that's intentional. The vision is established and the epilogue is already sketched out... taking place in year 2517. Try starting (...)


    4. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      I've just finished reading both Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. I think a few things should be noted. Firstly. I love your use of imagery, maps and the like. I like that you are establishing meaning in symbols (...)


    5. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      I've just finished reading both Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. I think a few things should be noted. Firstly. I love your use of imagery, maps and the like. I like that you are establishing meaning in symbols (...)


    6. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      I've just finished reading both Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. I think a few things should be noted. Firstly. I love your use of imagery, maps and the like. I like that you are establishing meaning in symbols (...)


    7. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      So I kinda have middle-of-the-road opinions about Chapter 1. It feels unpolished and not in a sort of "you didn't do any editing" way, but instead in a "style over clarity" way. Which, if I'm to assume (...)


    8. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      Two important notes for anyone reading this thread and to the great Beverlyy! You'll find out that being 73 years old in 2063 feels more like being 60... if you have the proper nootropic supplements. (...)


    9. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      So I kinda have middle-of-the-road opinions about Chapter 1. It feels unpolished and not in a sort of "you didn't do any editing" way, but instead in a "style over clarity" way. Which, if I'm to assume (...)


    10. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      I didn't read anything past ch. 2 ... But, no, it shouldn't start with ch.2 as ch.1 if I understand correctly does feature the protagonist in the second half. And this is not a prologue per se. However, (...)


    11. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      So I kinda have middle-of-the-road opinions about Chapter 1. It feels unpolished and not in a sort of "you didn't do any editing" way, but instead in a "style over clarity" way. Which, if I'm to assume (...)


    12. Re: Do you think Nova should start with Chapter Two instead?

      So I kinda have middle-of-the-road opinions about Chapter 1. It feels unpolished and not in a sort of "you didn't do any editing" way, but instead in a "style over clarity" way. Which, if I'm to assume (...)


    13. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      UPDATE: Drop by my other thread and come check out my Youtube Channel: https://www.royalroad.com/forums/thread/111726                                                                                   (...)


    14. Re: Looking for Things to Review

      Hello! If you're still looking for interesting things... here's some well-written speculative fiction, a dystopian narrative of the near future. Thanks! -R https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/53929/nova-interitus (...)


    15. Re: Advanced Review / Comment Trade

      I'm up to exchange comments or full reviews, or PM critiques if anyone here on this thread wants to hook up. Cheers. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/53929/nova-interitus You got it. Just please (...)


    16. Re: Would it be wrong to offer editing services?

      Open up a support ticket (https://www.royalroad.com/support) and ask the admins directly.  I'm not sure if that would count as impermissible commercial advertisement.  Thanks for the idea.


    17. Would it be wrong to offer editing services?

      Would it be wrong or uncouth to offer full line edits and recommendations for a small fee... like a few dollars per 10k words?


    18. Re: Looking for reviews - will reciprocate.

      I'll do a review swap with you. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/48206/bioloxys-genesis Just went through this thread and found the most interesting thing to me. I just read your synopsis and I'd (...)


    19. Re: Advanced Review / Comment Trade

      I'm up to exchange comments or full reviews, or PM critiques if anyone here on this thread wants to hook up. Cheers. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/53929/nova-interitus


    20. Re: What's your favorite thing about your story?

      I hate my story and I hope it never comes true. I love writing it, and I love how it's based in the southwest, loosely on my hometown. The first chapter is based on a dream from a decade ago. I pray (...)