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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
If you are still willing, I always welcome critique and feedback. My only work's in the sig, so it shouldn't be hard to find. Done, I hope it helps. But doesn’t seem like you really needed it.
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
Hello, I would be thrilled to accept your generous offer. If you are still willing I'd like a b-type review. You can find my work in my signature. Done! Hope it helps!
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Re: Words that defeat you
Ironically "that", but in the opposite way. I place it down while writing and later, when I reread, I remove it to improve the sentence's flow. I find that to be filler in most cases.
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
Method B here is the link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/51003/8-the-infinite/chapter/836656/prologue Done! I hope it helps!
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
This looks super helpful! I'm torn about which one, but I think since we're mostly looking for feedback instead of critical edits right now, Method A sounds great! I hope your editing is going well, (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
Method A, if you have time please. I already know my prologue isn't working and I'm struggling to figure out a way to make it stronger. My goal is to make the difference between Sara and her persona as (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
Hey I would really appreciate it if you could review my first chapter too. For the method I would take A because I already know what I could improve on. Some positive feedback will give me motivation. (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
Option C: Give me the most scathing, pedantic critique you can. Do itttt Done. I hope this helps.
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
This is very kind of you. Can I humbly ask for a Method B review for Bob's Book Thank you! Done! I hope it helps!
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
I would love a review of Devour City. I'm open to either option A or B, whichever you have time for, as either would be a great help. Even if you don't get to Devour City thanks for giving back to (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
A big part of the reason for writing here for me is to get some feedback. So, yeah, your offer is great, and I'm daring to go for option B since I know I need to improve a lot. Thanks! Done! I hope (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
A big part of the reason for writing here for me is to get some feedback. So, yeah, your offer is great, and I'm daring to go for option B since I know I need to improve a lot. Thanks! Done! I hope (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
Very kind of you to be helping folks. Not sure if you are still going, but if you are I would love some feedback. Unfortunately, I'm too much of a coward to post my work yet haha, but if you would (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
Sorry about the delay, I had to handle some personal business. I will be back on track next week!
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
Hi there! This is a super genuine and thoughtful exercise, thank you in advance for your generosity. I'd like a method B review of the first chapter (the only chapter currently posted) of "Rise of (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
Thank you pretty much for the review! I'll see to fix the grammar mistakes in the next edition pass. I know i carry some heavy comma vices from spanish. Yeah, commas were probably the most common. (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
I'd like the B one for the story in my signature, if you'd be so kind. Thank you pretty much in advance. Edit: LMAO I HAD FORGOOT TO ENABLE THE SIGNATURE, I AM SO SORRY. Done! I hope it helps!
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
I'd love if you could review my story with a critical eye. Tell me what I'm doing well, what I need to do better. Please be nice though. Thank you. Done! I hope it helps!
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
*raises hand* If you're still up for it, then I'm in. I'd like to get Method B, it would give me something to reflect upon in my break. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/55816/the-winds-bestowed (...)
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Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/58783/above-and-below If you end up doing mine, could you do a mix of both methods? I would like for you too look over it with a critical eye and point out what I've (...)
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