AncapChaos

AncapChaos

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    1. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      I'd grade the tokens into categories of some sort. You can increase it by using the token, but at the end of every category (or at least high ones), there should be a bottleneck, such as, for a levitation (...)


    2. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      Funny thing, your last paragraph is something i completly obliterated with my second chapter. With a 350 word count explanation of cultivation in a mass produced book. I know it will scare people off but (...)


    3. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      I agree with the social implications mentioned by Flamebeard, but I will go one step further: generational growth and compound interest.  If the amount of prana you start with is dependent on that of (...)


    4. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      There are a few world building considerations that a hereditary system like this implies. 1) extremely unequal division of power where a few families control the vast majority of wealth and resources (...)


    5. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      Now that you've brought it to my attention someone getting access to a limitless supply of prana would be a big problem, so I think I'll make it so that your body will start to break down and you won't (...)


    6. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      I plan on making tokens something that your born with so I think it'd be a good idea to have them be more like birthmarks rather than actual tokens, that way they can't be taken or passed around so easily. (...)


    7. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      Yes prana is basically just mana, as for tokens they're not techniques there abilities that your born with but you need prana to use them and as you cultivate and increase your prana it allows you to use (...)



    8. Re: I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      Details, please: context, where are you currently and what's your balance point?  I edited the original to include the information.


    9. I would very much appreciate it if I could get some help ironing out the power system of my story.

      Okay so I've been working on this story for a while now and I've got pretty much everything worked out except the power system, so I wanted to get some advice and help with sorting it out and making it (...)


    10. Re: Hallo

      Welcome. Nowt wrong with procrastinating. 😅 I hope you enjoy RR and if you write that your fiction finds an audience when it's ready to share. Thank you.


    11. Hallo

      I'm not completely new since I've had an account for a few month's now I think, but I haven't done much of anything because I've been procrastinating. So I'm now deciding to bite the bullet and try to (...)