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Re: Promote your story by giving me the most gruesome scenes you have... (TW)
Not my most gory scene, but the first real monster the MC fights is introduced. "It did not take long for the Vryko to come, the smell growing so thick that Cole could practically feel the miasma upon (...)
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Re: First Chapter Challenge
Chapter 1 of the Homunculus Knight Its 10k words long, I might have miscalculated on what an acceptable chapter length is.
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Re: Promote your story by sharing a simple sentance that foreshadowed something major in the story (SPOILER WA(...)
"Dietrich looked at the crack in the Sarcophagus into the pitch-black innards of that accidental prison for an ancient monster. And for a split second, Dietrich swore something looked back at him from (...)
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Re: Promote your story with your MC's weapon of choice
A halberd. Its range and use against Cavalry make it good for fighting large Undead and other monsters. While its three edges, axe, spear, and hook, work for different types of armor and foes. Utilitarian (...)
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Re: Promote your story with the first three paragraphs the reader sees
“ “A Homunculus is an artificial body of flesh and blood constructed by arcane means. They are, by definition, inert husks, lacking intelligence, will, and a soul. However, there has been one exception (...)
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Re: Moving away from LIT-RPG for a while, any suggestions?
Godclads- Cyberpunk meets Theology flavored with Ultra violence and philosophy. The Homunculus Knight - Noble Dark horror adventure about a Hunter of the Undead (My story) 12 Miles Below - Futuristic (...)
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Re: January 2023 Thread - Promote your Story
https://i.redd.it/6lfbcqlgbb9a1.jpg The Homunculus Knight "The town of Glockmire has lived under the iron-fisted rule of Vampires for centuries. Its people long cowed into submission by the ruling (...)
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Re: promote your story by telling us the WORST thing about it.
The Chapters are too long, the World building is too dense and my grammar needs work.
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Re: December Thread - Promote your Story
https://www.royalroadcdn.com/public/covers-full/the-homunculus-knight-aacaszzpra.jpg?time=1637587979 Title: The Homunculus Knight Genre: Nobledark Fantasy with Horror elements Wordcount: 300,000+ (...)
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Re: Promote your story by telling me what its video game would be like
I've had reviewers compare my story to The Witcher and The Curse of Strahd, so that speaks for itself. My MC actually started as a DnD Character. (Reborn Blood Hunter/Paladin Multiclass) so the universe (...)
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Re: promote your story by describing it badly.
A religious fanatic and a disaster bisexual barmaid try and save a town from the Undead. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/48770/the-homunculus-knight
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Re: Promote your story by telling us three major plot points (SPOILERS)
1. Someone is creating an army of the Undead. 2. MC-1 is on a holy mission he's probably not qualified for. 3. MC-2 lost her mother to an Undead Werewolf. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/48770/the-homunculus-knight (...)
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Re: Promote your book with your first sentence - they say the first sentence is the most important: PROVE IT.
Book 1 of my story has a pretty boring opening line, but Book 2, I think has a winner. "A field of identical corpses surrounded the God of Death." https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/48770/the-homunculus-knight (...)
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Re: New Horror & Scary Stories
I know I'm a little late, but I have two good options. Godclad- Gruesome and Metal Cyberpunk that has some very eldritch moments and scary ideas. The Homunculus Knight- My story. Nobledark about (...)
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Re: Royal road suggestions
The Homunculus Knight - My story. Wandering Warrior who hunts the Undead on a quest to a town enslaved by Vampires. Nobledark High Fantasy with long chapters (10,000 words) every 7-14 days. Firebrand- (...)
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Re: Epic Fantasy?
The Homunculus Knight (by me) is more Witcher than LOTR, but I've gotten some good responses. It's about a wandering warrior who hunts the Undead. On a holy mission to a town controlled by Vampires. (...)
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Re: Moving away from LIT-RPG for a while, any suggestions?
God-Clad is really, really good. If you like Cyberpunk. No Lit-rpg elements, but it meshes Cyberpunk with Magic in a way that is not only believable but fantastically metal. Gorey and grim but just generally (...)
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