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Re: Tell Us About Your Story(Round 2)
There's magic, vampires, half-human half-animal creatures, in its early stages. First long story I've written, with this style. I try to make it so every character has a role in the long run, and try to (...)
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Re: Used a grammar editor to make my story better. It is perfect now.
Perfect grammar, perfect flow, perfect everything. I have never read such greatness before
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Re: Giving out free (almost) reviews.
Hello, I'd really appreciate if you have the time to also check out my work, I'm mostly used to writing very specific short stories, so I decided to try my hand at a longer one, and want to see what works (...)
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Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!
I'd like feedback for the story linked in my signature, as I'm not really used to writing longer stories. Thanks in advance
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Re: Most brutally honest critique not a swap (full)
To be honest I'm actually looking forward to this. I'm not really interested in review as much as feedback, as I'm dipping my toes in a new and different style. I hope you'll get to it whenever you're (...)
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Re: I will give feedback for first three chapters for free (0/10)
If you're willing to I'd appreciate if you checked out the first three chapters I've uploaded. I'm mostly used to writing short stories, so any feedback and criticism will really help.
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Re: Beginner's Guide
Thanks for the guide it's really helpful
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Re: Giving out [Free] reviews
Hello! I've only posted one chapter of my story, but I hope to update bi-weekly/weekly. It's fantasy in genre, with adventure/romance hidden in there. The story itself follows Marvin Perlie, a sixteen (...)
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Hello, one and all!
I heard about this site from a friend of mine who mainly reads here, and decided to give posting my original fiction here a shot. I hope to be able to give weekly/bi-weekly updates on my stories, as I (...)
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First story post, and I'm not really sure how to market it
I've already posted a summary in another thread, but I'm not really versed in navigating this site, so any advice in would be greatly appreciated. Sixteen year old Marvin Perlie finds himself exposed (...)
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Re: September Thread - Promote your Story
Sixteen year old Marvin Perlie finds himself exposed to a world of wizards, monsters and more as he struggles to make peace with his own past, insecurities, and the friends and enemies in this new world. (...)
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