The story is very good amd the character is enjoyable. The only issue I have with the story is that the amount of sexual content is rather heavy. While I don't mind the occasional love scene, this story is filled with more than too much. Luckily it thins out a bit around chapter 30 and even were that not the case it is still well worth the read. Keep up the great work!
I like the concept and I'm extremely happy with the way you are handling the training. Yea, he's gonna be epicly overpowered, at least in regards to other players, but at least we see it happen. That and the fact that while you show the training through 20 or so chapters, it takes the Protagonists more than just a couple of days to become OP.
Well written and well thought out. The grammar and spelling allow for an easy read.
The character develops at a good pace, however that pace begins to slow down several chapters in.
The story starts off a bit slowly, and the secondary characters need work.
The action (not specifically fighting) has started to become slower in the more recent chapters and the story itself is becoming harder to be attached to.
It is good that the readers are not bombarded with names, places and other sources of information, but are instead focused on story development.
Still an amazing story and well worth reading.
Great job, looking forward to reading more!