CShadrockz

CShadrockz

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    1. Re: [Closed] Review swaps for a first person fantasy novel.

      Yes to both of yours! I will get the reviews back to you by next Friday!


    2. Re: Review swaps for a first person fantasy novel.

      Hi! I'm interested in swapping - preferably with the 'Talis Man' title in the signature. It's also 1st person fantasy. Let me know! I may not be able to respond right away but will check back early next (...)


    3. Re: Looking for review swap targets that fit these criterias

      Hi! Constructive feedback = negative critisms, right? Ah... No, that's not actually it... Constructive criticism is about giving feedback that will help improve the reading experience. It's (...)


    4. Re: Sound Effects in Writing

      While I agree that the overusage of sound effects is bad, sometimes one single word fits the pacing better than needing half a page to describe a sound. In the meantime, while listening to the author's (...)


    5. Re: Looking for review swap targets that fit these criterias

      Hi! Constructive feedback = negative critisms, right? Because if so, I'm available to swap. Talis Man seems to fit your criteria the most and that one, I need as much feedback as possible on. (...)


    6. Re: Advanced Review 20k Swap

      Hi! I'll swap. Either one below, in the sig. could use a swap also, appreciate any constructive feedback too! Let me know. Same to you as well. Finished reading, and have the review ready. When you (...)


    7. Re: Advanced Review 20k Swap

      Hi! I'll swap. Either one below, in the sig. could use a swap also, appreciate any constructive feedback too! Let me know.


    8. Re: SpookTober Prompt Thread.

      Oh hot dog. Writing prompt time.


    9. Re: Let’s Have a Discussion—> Restrictions Apply

      Hi!! Ima just ramble below.  My fantasy keeps leaning into speculative fiction, no matter how much I try to get into a different sub-genre. Not sure why. Probably with more practice, I'll be able to (...)


    10. Re: Shout outs for some great stories I've found here on RR

      Ah! you're awesome OP. Thanks for including my story on your list! 


    11. Re: Hi! Feedback to adjust early plotline

      I’ll take a look, leave a review. Feel free to review one of mine as well. Thanks. I appreciate it! I'll send you a pm


    12. Hi! Feedback to adjust early plotline

      Hi! I am writing a novel called Talis Man (working title). It's my first fantasy novel as I usually write in slice of life and romance, so naturally, I am running into hiccups in the story. They're (...)


    13. Re: Review Swap Me! New-ish Fics Only (Read Desc)!

      Hi! I'd like to swap too! looking for constructive feedback for Talis Man! Let me know!


    14. Re: How Do You Decide What Feedback to Listen To?

      Hi! I do a lot of critique swaps for other works and have recieved a fun amount of feedback. I've learned there are some great things to learn from them but for the other end of the spectrum - our own (...)


    15. Re: Review Swap For Fantasy Works

      Hi! I'm interested! I'lll PM you.


    16. Re: Looking for feedback to my new writing style

      I'm new to the first person style of writing and went with a cop story instead of my comfortable fantasy standard. Please check it out and give me a honest review thx. https://royalroadl.com/fiction/13373 (...)


    17. Re: How to Quick Plot a Story Structure

      Timely post. Thanks for the information! Do you follow these structures? I follow the 3 Act structure for the genres I write in but for the first time, one of my fantasies is naturally progressing (...)


    18. Re: Review swap for a very short opening!

      Hi!!!! Need a swap for Talis Man! I’ll get back to you when I’m done with the others! And thanks for the reply  :DrakanMelt: Thanks! I'll get to yours today or tomorrow.


    19. Re: Review swap for a very short opening!

      Hi!!!! Need a swap for Talis Man!


    20. Re: Dude, I just want to do a few review-swaps [OPEN]

      Hi! Fantasy! 20k is at chapter 7 of Talis Man. Let me know if you'd still like to swap!