Twinkle Blossom

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    1. Re: Would anyone beta read a prologue for me?

      Alright, if I were mod, I'd close this thread. Thank you to everyone for answering and giving me constructive feedback. It was a lot of help, and I appreciate it. 


    2. Re: Would anyone beta read a prologue for me?

      I quite like what you've written, particularly the first part. However, I do agree with ArDeeBurger about the use of passive voice. To me, the second section at the camp lacks description. You don't (...)


    3. Re: Would anyone beta read a prologue for me?

      The switch in perspective between the two parts is jarring.  Is Mia the person in the first part, or is it someone else being told to care for his brother (Note that I said 'his' while Mia clearly a (...)


    4. Re: Hello, happy to be here

      Welcome! Let's hope your stories don't bring you into their dangerous worlds. Or do, you could be a mighty mage.  :FancyDrakan: If only ✌️


    5. Re: Hello, happy to be here

      Don't judge your creative writing ability against your grades in creative writing courses! Most of those programs are geared towards literary fiction. They don't even like regular old genre fiction, (...)


    6. Re: Hello, happy to be here

      Welcome to Royal Road. It's funny what motivates us to get back into something. Love your attitude, just write what you want to and put it out there. I feel the same way. Hope you find enjoy being here (...)


    7. Re: Hello, happy to be here

      Hello Emma, welcome to RR! Thanks! Good to be here


    8. Re: Hello, happy to be here

      fancy seeing you here eh, I see you're doing well! Cinn already cast her famous information spell~ cringe is such a beautiful expression, so it seems for in its essence, it just means indulging in (...)


    9. Re: Hello, happy to be here

      Welcome! I knew there was another thread hiding, glad it showed up. I've definitely seen at least one other RR person mention Figment, so there might be some more alumni lurking about. For the (...)


    10. Re: Would anyone beta read a prologue for me?

      Yes. It is too short for Royal Road, if this is what you're planning to post. Royal Road does have a 500 word limit, to get people to post longer chapters. You will see -- if I may -- that though what (...)


    11. Re: Would anyone beta read a prologue for me?

      I can't really help with beta reading that much since I am neither writer or native English speaker but maybe I can give a bit of advice. There is a 500 words limit for a chapter length when you publish (...)


    12. Re: Would anyone beta read a prologue for me?

      i have time to read three hundred words or so today i think if you post it here, then that should be ok(?) Thank you very much. I'll edit the original post then The first half of that prologue (...)


    13. Re: Would anyone beta read a prologue for me?

      i have time to read three hundred words or so today i think if you post it here, then that should be ok(?) Thank you very much. I'll edit the original post then


    14. Re: Hello, happy to be here

      Hello, my name is Emma. Online, I usually go by TB. I'm 25, and I haven't really posted original fiction online since before figment.com was dead and then deleted. (If anyone used to be on there, OMG HI (...)


    15. Re: Would anyone beta read a prologue for me?

      As of now, it's short and pretty matter of fact, only about 300 words. It's been a while since I've written something that I intend to post online that's not fanfiction, and I know one of the hardest parts (...)


    16. Re: Is an 'annoying' protag a story killer for you?

      I think that's hard to answer since a character being annoying is really subjective. Some people hate it when a character is weak or cowardly; others hate it when a character is too strong. Some think (...)