Dante Luca Morningstar

Dante Luca Morningstar

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    1. Re: What counts as a view?

      The total views represent the people clicking on the fiction and just seeing the blurb. people who got into a chapter would be counted as people who read the current chapter, and as a result, the chapter (...)


    2. Re: How Many Times a Week Should You Publish?

      I'm planning on starting a story on here soon, but I don't know how many times a week I should publish chapters. I've been considering either five or seven times a week, however, I don't know if that's (...)


    3. Re: How do I succintly shape a succesfully saucy summary? Shamelessly Soliciting.

      Ooh, thanks! I've messed with a little so I think it's a lot better now, so I really appreciate all of yours' advice! It was a major help. c: Nice to see you there senior brother! (you have been here (...)


    4. Re: Is my novel really worth all the time effort

      TheRealAlpha2 really gave a good point. Important stuff come first, before habits, but if you are looking at it as a future, a way to make money, so you should get your experience by writing more and (...)


    5. Re: Grammar/Spelling Check

      you can also use word counter  here the link: word counter Anyway, welcome senior brother to the community! :DrakanWine:


    6. Re: What counts as a view?

      The total views represent the people clicking on the fiction and just seeing the blurb. people who got into a chapter would be counted as people who read the current chapter, and as a result, the chapter (...)


    7. Re: How do I succintly shape a succesfully saucy summary? Shamelessly Soliciting.

      For reference, here's my summary as it right now; D. Donovan Delilah is very much your average high-school student. He's mildly funny, moderately quippy, is in possession of a limited yet satisfying (...)


    8. Re: First Novel Submission

      Cover truly isn't needed but you should put something interesting to draw the readers in. There are a lot of people who use AI generated pictures these days, I'll leave some links here. dream art (...)


    9. Re: Why is my profile picture blurry?

      It looks sharper on rr than it does on twitter Actually not really? I also think it kinds of looks a bit more blurry.  But Y'aknow its not that big of a deal, it still looks aight nonetheless I (...)


    10. Re: Can you help me with what I should do for my story

      There were a lot of interesting choices. I'm actually kind of interested in how it will come out


    11. Re: MY FIRST SERIES ON ROYAL ROAD

      Dante Luca Morningstar I will admit to my faulty Mayhaps I need to wrap my head around the entire dialogue tag thing. I truly don't know what to tell you my friend, such writing style seems (...)


    12. Re: MY FIRST SERIES ON ROYAL ROAD

      A lot of dialogue lines with no dialogue tags. pure telling and not showing. ????? You must be new?  Dialogue without tags, or the occasional "said" is absolutely the accepted default.  If (...)


    13. Re: MY FIRST SERIES ON ROYAL ROAD

      A lot of dialogue lines with no dialogue tags. pure telling and not showing. Dialogue tags are an example of telling. The actual dialogue shows the reader what is said and the tags tell the reader who (...)


    14. Re: MY FIRST SERIES ON ROYAL ROAD

      A lot of dialogue lines with no dialogue tags. pure telling and not showing. Dialogue tags are an example of telling. The actual dialogue shows the reader what is said and the tags tell the reader who (...)


    15. Re: Looking for opinion on my grammar.

      You good m8 just checked the entire 8 chapters with copy and paste to WordCounter  There were the smallest of grammatical mistakes in two chapters, life self-defense  and another smaller word on an earlier (...)


    16. Re: MY FIRST SERIES ON ROYAL ROAD

      Nice! So nice, in fact, that I copyedited your first chapter. Hope you like it. (Also, I really enjoyed the begging (very cozy) and the final sentence.) pm me if you want the Word file with Track Changes. (...)


    17. Re: Wait Until Writathon Ends to Start a New Story?

      The entire point of the competition is for you to write. Yeah if you reach 55,000 you get a premium for a month and for 25,000 you get on a list which is shown to everyone. But its mostly about you writing (...)


    18. Re: Rising stars and .5 ⭐ ratings?

      The first comment I recieved on the chapter was no.no. no. No multiple MCs!!! Obviously I can't please everyone, but what should I do? Should I keep going with the MC in the dungeon? Should I introduce (...)


    19. Re: Rising stars and .5 ⭐ ratings?

      First off, congratulations on getting to the rising stars at your third week! Now I admit, I'm no big shot by any margin like all of the big authors who replayed back to the question. And maybe some (...)


    20. Re: Rising stars and .5 ⭐ ratings?

      I'm too afraid to message the reviewers.  Like, the user who gave a 2 star review early on would probably just decrease it to a 0.5 star review if I did that.  Are they able to do that? Yes, I believe (...)