Slaynoir

Slaynoir

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    1. Re: Unusual, Funny, but also a little Serious story; requesting rating/reviews

      Basically I'm looking for what others think of my story 'I Nearly Died and My Tongue Was Swapped With A Demon King's' as I may actually decide to publish this book out of the fact it seems to be doing (...)


    2. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      This review is done for  My Quiet Life  by  Waurpel So let me see what I can do. First off, there is a fine line between writing descriptions, conversations, and details. How are they different (...)


    3. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      hi, I'm a new author here working on a new work and it's still unpublished and serializing username:evolvingyanjing  work:Soul of the Fallen (Skybreaker Trilogy)  Synopsis: I am Leon Marshall, (...)


    4. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      This is for BridgerCampbellCannon who wrote Wild Meridian. So I'm no pro but I can help to the best of my personal experience! I hope that will suffice for you. Anyhow, this pm was also end up on the (...)


    5. Re: How do you come up with a universe that hasn't been done before? And how do you create a whole story?

      Honestly, I don't know. But I do know that sometimes a joke idea can turn into a huge thing. Like, when I wrote I Nearly Died And My Tongue Was Swapped With A Demon King's, I had no course or sense of (...)


    6. Re: Holy mother on a stick 1000 and counting views?! WHAT THE H-

      Congratulations. Just goes to show that if you put something good out there, people will respond. Well done. I'm just blown away. I've never had this much success with anything I've written. I have (...)


    7. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      This is for Zearth - Cry Wolfe -- All in all, the story itself is rather easy to understand. Wolf looking for food, attacks, is found out, runs and turns into a person that later has child in turn, (...)


    8. Re: Holy mother on a stick 1000 and counting views?! WHAT THE H-

      I really wish I could post my story on scribble hut here but I can't due to a contest it's in on this other site. I literally have over 1.1k views now. ONE THOUSAND. And how long did that take you ask? (...)


    9. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      qThis is a most generous offer! I hope you find lots of great stories to read. If you can, I'd like to claim a spot as well, for my story called DOTS. 20K will get you just about through The Book (...)


    10. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      Well don't mind if I diddly dooo~ Username: BenJepheneT Which Series (doesn't matter how big or small): Caninstinct What You'd Like Help in Writing: just general stuff; whatever problem you (...)


    11. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      Oh! I would love the help! User: KoyukiMegumi Series: The Gate of Shadows Link below in signature What would i like help with?: Mostly grammar stuff or any other issues that escape me. Any (...)


    12. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      Username: Asviloka Which Series: ReIgnite (An Unwanted Dragon) What You'd Like Help in Writing: pacing, and whether the characterization seems strong enough What You're Struggling With in Your (...)


    13. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      This review is for littlefoodie. Alright. Let's get this in depth started! So...hmm. Well, you've got balance of detail. I understand the situation. But...it lacks meat, in terms of body of the (...)


    14. Re: Who'd Like Some Reviews? Will read 10k or less stories.

      Not sure if you want to do female oriented romance but here is my story. If not, it’s ok too 😊 Username: LittleFoodie Which Series (any at or under 20K): The Crimson Throne What You'd Like (...)


    15. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      Hi! I would love having you review my story! I'm always trying to figure out some ways to improve :) YOu can find it in my signatrue! Awesome! You'll be added/


    16. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      Username: BridgerCampbellCannon Series: Wild Meridian  What I’d like help with: general thoughts on how it could be better in the beginning. I think it starts off too slow and I’d like to know (...)


    17. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      Username: Tridetect Series: Progressive Detective the Q What I'd like help with: I'm not sure if its my overall plot or drawing style that isn't drawing the crowd in. I want to improve but I don't (...)


    18. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      Username: Alaqi Which Series: Maker of Power Make it more interesting. Retention in the first 3 chapters (initial 7k words) (goes from 155/135/104/72/69 for you to have a retention ideia) Okay, (...)


    19. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      I really don't care anymore. xD I need to read something and if that means helping you folks out by all means. I'll give everyone in depth explanation like I did with these folks from the other thread (...)


    20. Re: Who'd Like Some Reviews? Will read 10k or less stories.

      I'd like a review. Idk where to check if my story is under 20k but It's not very length I think.  Username: Tridetect Series: Progressive Detective the Q What I'd like help with: I'm not sure (...)