At beginning i was just reading as it seemed fun but as i kept reading it kept getting better and better!
The characters are well defined (except yin OK i get it she is a bird know almost human but still....),
The story has great foreshadowing and new ideas of class and new worlds.........if you forget the fact most of it author came up with after a random poll, a harem which dose not feel ,well there are only two so yea not even a harem(though one gained ability to turn into a monster girl anytime)
But most of all the MC is great,Not some crazy ass physio or a wimpy wiener but just your everyday normal guy who has a a good heart and lacks common sense a bit(a lot maybe considering has god of madness and wild luck!)
just hope you are able to keep up the good work!
P.s. i hope you introduce some new classes
In most of these stories mc goes justifying his actions turning him into a not so evil guy but the one.........you kept him evil to the core i like it! i hope it stays that way!
Ok fist of all i haven't reached to ur latest post yet but loved the story so far!
they way u mixed realty and gaming is great!
this story character progress is great (a little too much but it is fine!)and loved MC funny mamas boy talk!
there can be some more things such as beta players(how thats ur job!) will like to read more!
First of all i would like to thank you for such a epic work!
after going through same old stories of reincarnations this one is simply on a whole new level!
the very concept and its placement is unique,something like this should have given a felling of confusion but you somehow made it quit simple to understand!
there were some grammar issues here and there but overall nice. Well there is a need for a little character adjustment as the twins personality and the princess!
THE FEARLESS LEADER WAS AN EPIC CHARACTER!
please keep on going on with this story thank you for your hard work!