Blind Serpent

Blind Serpent

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    1. Re: Just Rewrote the first 8 chapters of my story - it is essentially new :)

      Followed  It sure was fun to read all of your awesome comments, thank you! 


    2. Re: Completed massive rework of my book

      Pretty excited. I got a lot of feedback on my book here on Royal Road and finally completed a massive redo of the first 8 chapter, got a new cover and name, too! "Serpent's Herald" That was (...)


    3. Re: Trading Reviews for comments

      Read a couple chapters of your rumble circuit story. Not bad, the writing is pretty fast paced. I only have one story in the sig. I noticed you read my prologue way back when. It's all completely changed, (...)


    4. Re: Half a million views!

      Wow congrats! Will have to join next year!


    5. Re: At 200 pages, I do hereby join the 0.5 table

      Welcome! I had one, but then it went away somehow. After several weeks. Very weird. 


    6. Completed massive rework of my book

      Pretty excited. I got a lot of feedback on my book here on Royal Road and finally completed a massive redo of the first 8 chapter, got a new cover and name, too! "Serpent's Herald" That was a (...)


    7. Re: Looking for Things to Review

      You've already done my book - when it was called Void and Flame. From your and many other people's feedback I've ended up rewriting the first 8 chapters and partially rewriting 12-13. You'll be happy (...)


    8. Just Rewrote the first 8 chapters of my story - it is essentially new :)

      Hi Everyone, I spent a month reworking the beginning of my story to adjust for pacing and character development. Posted it all up today! Link in my signature. It is Fantasy-Mystery. Thanks


    9. Re: Leatherwork Charm - based on in-story lore

      Wow, awesome work  Thank you! I'm hoping to make more of these, but difficult to find time!


    10. Re: I Have YouTube Channel That Does Web Novel Reviews, Is Any Interested

      I'll bite! My book is in the signature, let me know if it's something you're into. I also have a map that I made - Tolkien Style, and an item from the book that I created from leather - links in (...)


    11. Re: The worst book you've ever read?

      I thought to read a classic - 20 000 leagues under the sea. So I found it on audible. Oh my bloody lord. YES I have views on that book. Someone tried telling me it was just a bad translation (...)


    12. Re: One bad rating is that bad?

      The honourable thing to do is to burn your computer in a ritualistic pyre and never write again. In fact, it's better to retire to an isolated temple in the mountains and devote your life to enlightenment. (...)


    13. Re: The worst book you've ever read?

      I thought to read a classic - 20 000 leagues under the sea. So I found it on audible. Oh my bloody lord. It is so drop dead boring. How on earth is that possible? I struggled hard to finish listening. (...)


    14. Re: Legend Born - Book 1; ARN [ mystery, magic, intrigue, suspense, and a spoon-full of action ]

      Might be a bit too short for such a thing, Solman - try to publish a few more chapters first, get active on the forums, put your book in your signature, etc.


    15. Re: Map Artist Needed!

      I'll start you off, My maps are LOTR style. I draw them first by hand then digitize them. https://imgbb.com/znnZTgH I am also a writer so I am familiar with the process of taking maps from (...)


    16. Re: How to incorporate lore without exposition?

      Oh heck yeah! I have already retconned a few items and planning a major one in a couple of weeks... lol Whats the point of getting better if you don't improve things? 


    17. Re: How to incorporate lore without exposition?

      ... ... ... It's a bit of both probably. He already had a good chunk of stuff that he left out but he also developed massive amounts after it. Which in turn were left out from (...)


    18. Re: How to incorporate lore without exposition?

      Tolkien, for example, wrote a lot of lore and did a lot of worldbuilding, but he didn't cram pack everything into The Hobbit because it wasn't needed. He wrote other stuff for that. Or because (...)


    19. Re: Help!!! I just lost over 30 followers in almost 10 minuets

      Calm down... it could be that people gave up a while ago but just now noticed that they still follow you. 30 followers more or less doesn't do anything. You still have 240.


    20. Re: Most brutally honest critique not a swap (full)

      Hey, got your feedback and it's all good stuff. You mentioned that you'd prefer a response in this threadI'll focus on the negatives that you brought up, since that's what we're hear for lol. - you (...)