Pakko

Pakko

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Reincarnated into a Time-Loop Dungeon as a LVL100 Catgirl Chef!

At first, when I read this story's title I was apprehensive at reading it but I gave it a try anyway. This story stars a cast of cat girls and their adventures working in a dungeon. The story is written very uniquely as a series of diary entries and I find it works very well. As a bonus, the chapters are pretty short so you can breeze through them and get a feel quickly as to whether or not you like this story.


I'm a brick! But why am I a Humanoid? [A Non-Level LitRPG with a Humanoid MC full of Magic, Drama and Comedic Undertone]

I'm a brick starts off strong so far as a quirky reincarnation fantasy but this time the old body was that of a sentient brick. The old brick is both smart and dumb at the same time and that causes hijinks. A lot of the exterior plot revolves around political stuff while brick is growing up. The humor is childish but fun. The characters are sometimes unique but some of them don't feel fleshed out yet. If you are looking for something to read and what to kill some time then this book would be great to do it with.


Modern Awakening - A cultivation, LitRPG, apocalyptic novel

This story is off to a great start so far but has sadly stopped posting. I really enjoyed what little was posted so far. The characters are interesting but only partially developed so far. The writing is great and flows well when reading. I hope that we can see more from this book. it definitely deserves to be expanded upon with the world and characters seen more.


『Master Of Centipedes』

This story is off to a great start so far but has sadly stopped posting. I really enjoyed what little was posted so far. The characters are interesting but only half developed so far. The writing is great and flows well when reading. I hope that we can see more from this book. it definitely deserves to be expanded upon with the world and characters seen more.


From Evil Overlord to NPC Shopkeeper

This story is off to a great start so far but has sadly stopped posting. I really enjoyed what little was posted so far. The characters are interesting but only half developed so far. The writing is great and flows well when reading. I hope that we can see more from this book. it definitely deserves to be expanded upon with the world and characters seen more.


Tree of Aeons (An isekai story)

Trees of Aeon is a great story that I have been following for a while. It has LitRPG elements with a great story that as of the more recent chapters is likely more than halfway through. The characters are great and there is no issue with the writing. Chapters a released consistently and the amount of filler is ok. It does characer growth in strength very well and each character in the story is unique.


EDIT

Pros:

The characters of Joshua, Erin, Bill/Ted, and the others are interesting and have fun quirks that distinguish them all from one another. Ir would be could to explore more of their motivation and goals, but it isn't a big worry for now.

I like the current mysteries and it has me mildly hooked. What are the voices at the beginning of the chapter? What might kill him or incapacitate him?

The writing is also good and I didn't notice any issues with how the story is presented.

Cons:

The first chapter was confusing at first with the Italicized stuff but it finished stronger.

There has been no killing yet despite the description. May or may not be negative.

Half of the setting takes place in school which you may or may not like

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Overall I like it so far. Not all of the comedy bit hit for me but the story is entertaining. I see that the author is also a fan of Only Villians Do That, with their chapter naming scheme. I don't have any other suggestions for the author story-wise. The only thing I can suggest is to promote your story elsewhere. It is a shame that this story only has three followers at the time of this review.


Prophecy Approved Companion

This story contains some great comedy and satire as it follows the MC's companion while he playtests the game. It is also great at exploring the themes of the story it sets up and crafting memorable and unique characters with often scripted goals while the chosen one breaks down the world around qube as she tries to adjust to the changes. Read this story now.


The Menocht Loop

The beginning of the story begins in a time loop and soon leaves it after a couple  dozen chapters to explore the world beyond the loop and I like it.  The characters are awesome and the magic system is interesting but not always explained until later. The story is high stakes at times and while serialized it doesn't feel like chapters are filler. The editing and grammar is all good and it is a great read


The Dog at the End of the World

Lucky is the perfect dog everyone needs for the system apocalypse and so are his friends. This is a great read for everyone who needs to relax and enjoys the companionship of animal friends. This story is near perfect in every way and everyone should check out this Litrpg.

This is your standard apocalypse RPG, but with the twist that Lucky is at the helm of all that is changing in the world and he will do everything he can to lead his pack to a better future.

The story is easy to read and is lots of fun with no noticeable editing mistakes. Enjoy the read.