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The Sorceress' Soul: A LitRPG Adventure

it's good grammar wise and the characters all seem to written properly if only a bit more 2d than I would have liked. The power system also seems relatively consistent. The only issue I have is that she is overpowered as hell because she's the first to do everything which completely nonsensical


Pirate Wizard - A Pirate Isekai LitRPG

So far it sounds great. All the plotlines seem to work together well and nothing seems to show many inconsistencies other than the fact that our mc can kill people a lot of levels higher than him. So far though, levels have shown to mean nothing which is fun. Magic so far seems intuitive and not game breaking which is also nice. Great MC if not a little too good for his own good. Not afraid of killing someone though while also trying not to kill someone if he can reasonably help it which is a nice touch.


Royal Blood

The book itself is mostly consistent with the power system and has mostly likable characters so far. The world and power system are also being fleshed out before our eyes without any infodumps. There also doesn't seem to be any jumps in logic so far. Other than the obvious power scaling issues that all of the people reading the story see obviously, there is also the issue of 'this didn't need to be an isekai'. In fact, the story itself would be much better without it being an isekai. I'm well aware that making the main character from another world lets the author not have to write about their childhood trauma or some shit, and I do think that they do isekai better than most novels especially with the morals of our mc. In my opnion though, the isekai itself is unecessary and the story itself would be better without it.


The not-immortal Blacksmith

well written

 

Very much a lighthearted slice of life that focuses much more on the world around our main character than himself. I am a huge fan of the various side stories that make up the bulk of the chapters read. The author especially does a great job with their worldbuilding. They have explained just enough of the world to make some sense and have done so without ever infodumping. The world so far seems fun. I can't wait until he decides to make phones and accidentally starts apple

It seems as though the story is our main characters adventures to becoming the strongest heretic while also being frenemies with the gods. Real nice guy who gets taken by the flow more often than not

Very rereadable

No real focus on romance but they do it well. It seems the author has decided to not go on the genghis khan route

 

 

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Unliving

incredible story with great worldbuilding so far that still has so much to offer. The power system itself is great, and although there is no grand training to reach a goal, there is also no issues with the power system whatsoever. Although mortality seems overpowered, it really isn't too bad and can be dealt with. The story is told in the first person, which may make it difficult for some, but the author is very good with their word use. The only plot hole I can find is why Nec Aarin hasn't taken over the two countries earlier.


The Axe Falls

good book. Only thing I'd ask for more of is a more explained system as we don't really see the screen often or make it an invisible system. Good plotline with nice linear progression and reason for our main character to be strong a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a 


Odd Patriarch (Xianxia)

The first few chapters went through a little too much POV change without letting the main character define himself first, but once you get past that part it becomes a great story. Another one of the cultivator with modern principles who isn't a bitch stories which is always nice. Great story and I hope you continue


Owlnother World

Good owl who I like a lot. 

kinda unnecessary that she has memories of her past life but it is a hole almost every author falls into in order to give their character wisdom. Very fun story with a good magic system so far and relatable characters. She gets stronger in a way that makes sense. Slice of life story with no clear motive but the author makes it work. Could use more of a plot but not bad at all


Book Of The Dead

Oh my god, I thought it was going to be kind of slow but still good but chapter 14 was a ride. An incredible ride that I hope to see more of in the future. It seems like the other kid's dreams were somehow bigger than what he believes is in his pants, and he knows little about how to execute with either.


Reluctant Visitor

pretty good premise but not perfect yet

good story with mostly good characters. It seems as though every character has some very real issues that they attempt to work out while also surviving in this new world. I say mostly good because the main boyo is kinda a generic mary sue type with a forced romance. Other than that, great story and I hope you contine your excellent work tho.