ILuxTenebris

ILuxTenebris

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    1. Re: Okay, trying again

      People have mentioned the synopsis and the update rate, so I'll try to give you feedback from another direction - the writing itself. Deep World. The cosmic and spiritual qi disappeared tens of thousands (...)


    2. Re: Okay, trying again

      I second what everyone else has said. And now, I'll address another point - your releases are too fast. You have 10 chapters released on the same day! How do you expect to get the readers' attention, (...)


    3. Re: Okay, trying again

      It's very hard to tell what the story is about from the blurb. I gave the first few chapters a quick look. The premise is interesting enough. The one thing I'd change would be to either stick to (...)


    4. Re: Okay, trying again

      It's very hard to tell what the story is about from the blurb. I gave the first few chapters a quick look. The premise is interesting enough. The one thing I'd change would be to either stick to past (...)


    5. Re: Okay, trying again

      Initial feedback:  Consider re-writing your synopsis.  From the tags, your readers generally get that the story is about a male anti-hero in a wuxia/xianxia fantasy.  The title of your work hints that (...)


    6. Re: Seeking 80k word review swap

      Hello!  I'm looking for like one story to do a review swap with. Ideally, I want to swap complete reads with a similar length novel. Just posted 76k words, with another 2-3k coming on Monday. I want (...)


    7. Re: Okay, trying again

      I don't know why, but my last post was deleted... Anyway, I will make it short (again). My story has over fifty thousand words (209pages) and still no feedback (I wonder if it's because I'm a bad writer (...)


    8. Re: Review swap for long runners

      Wow, I'm very surprised to see such a thread. I'm interested. My novel already has 116 pages but still don't have a single review, it's kinda hard to write without knowing if the readers like your story. (...)


    9. Re: +110 pages. Mix of eastern and western fantasy. I would be honored to read your FEEDBACK!

      http://img.webnovel.com/bookcover/19623834206919205/600/600.jpg?coverUpdateTime=1618620026573 Novel's Link First of all, I prefer a feedback than a review swap, but I would gladly do it too. (...)