Really good - love it!
Dark MC, undead. Good grammar and style of writing. Can't wait for more.
As in title. MC has much darker and sinister feel, as well as it seems he won't be getting absolutely OP as quickly as before. Keep it up and keep em chapters coming!
Wow, simply WOW!
It's 3 chapters only (so far), but i can say that your writing style and plot ideas are ones of the best i've seen on this site.
Can't wait to see how it develops!
P.S. Hated you for a second while reading prologue ending, great writer-prank idea and execution! :D GJ!