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    1. Re: Sunday Snippet Sharing 21/11 | WEEK 1️⃣7️⃣

      Rosie reached the precipice and hauled herself up and over into the dark forest. Unable to take even a moment to breath upon hearing the rasping voices shouting and screaming threats. Barely running (...)


    2. Re: Sunday Snippet Sharing 14/11 | SWEET 16 🍭

      “Sentinel Grimm.” Sara led him to an older, shorter, man. Same dark pants teamed with a white vest that showed his lean, toned, scarred arms. “Paladin Maxwell. What can I do for you this fine morning?” (...)


    3. Re: Sunday Snippet Sharing 07/11 | No-theme-fifteen

      The pair at the back of truck cleared John’s eye line, triggering whatever the boy and his grandfather kept hidden. A glowing red eye illuminating the canvas, and in a low, bone chilling, synthesized (...)


    4. Re: Sunday Snippet Sharing 31/10 | FRIGHTENING FOURTEEN🎃👻

      The body had laid behind an ammo bunker for hours. Limbs missing from above the joints, bones broken and muscle gnawed. A series of neat stab wounds ran down either side of the chest, deep enough to (...)


    5. Re: Sunday Snippet 24/10 | UNLUCKY..(?) WEEK 13 🍀☠

      “What are those?” John pointed to the small, black, flapping shapes that leapt from the ground and up into the endless blue as they neared. “Birds, damn pests you ask me, but they have a job to do.” (...)


    6. Re: Regarding Metrics for Non-Dominant Genres on RoyalRoad

      1000 pages is around 300,000 words, I just passed it a few days week ago, and that 1.5 volumes. It's not that Ultimately litrpg's are like big macs, people go to mcdonalds to get them. Sometimes they'll (...)


    7. Re: 🎵 sell your story, but make it rhyme 🎵

      There once was a man named John,  who'd been told the outside world had gone. He went out for a look, got attacked by some crooks, and was saved by a man in a truck. That's the first four chapters (...)


    8. Re: Sunday Snippet Sharing 17/10 | TWELFTH WEEK

      He used the red outlines the screen inside his eyes showed him to aim then bob up. Firing off the rest of the rifle mag with enough accuracy to give the raiders pause, holding them in the rubble. Then (...)


    9. Re: benj's schizophrenic toilet stall wall scribbles redux (Remix) [ft. Wu Tang Clan & Phil Collins]

      I like these drawing, your characters have a surreal look yet don't feel outlandish


    10. Re: Just hit the six figures club!

      The first rule of the six figure club is you do talk about it


    11. Re: Who here has the strongest MC

      within five minutes of letting it run under the tap first Peirce the lid with a sharp knife Work smarter, not harder stronger  


    12. Re: How do You Get Yourself into the Mood for Writing?

      I write to help my mental health, so usually it's not really a case of being in the 'mood' it's more that I have to give my mind something else to focus on before it spirals I lived with it for 20 years, (...)


    13. Re: Blades, Bullets or Bolts?

      But what I want to know is what would you consider to be the most invigorating to read? I would find two drunks fighting in an alley more interesting than armies battling, if I cared more about (...)


    14. Re: Sunday Snippet Sharing 10/10 | WEEK 11 OF 11

      “Why were you in The City? You raiding our supply lines?” With a surprisingly aggressive response for someone naked, soaking wet and strapped to a chair, the man answered. “Do I look like a f&$£ing (...)


    15. Re: The Art of Rocket Cat

      Yowwe ow! This made me laugh! When it comes to art, and animation, I either like it or I don't, and right away I liked this, simple, clean, with bags of charm and style 


    16. Re: Chapter Length

      I've started splitting my chapters as the norm now for 2 reasons. First it makes them easier to work with for me. And seconds it gives readers a choice, they can read it in parts or wait for the whole (...)


    17. Re: 1000 Pages, 30,000 Views!

      Congrats mate. Truly remarkable feat :) Thanks, couldn't have done it without the community 


    18. Re: Story length

      When I started I thought 50,000 would be enough. Currently at 400,000 so I'm probably not the best to ask (plus all my favourite books have maps at the beginning) but it should be as long as it needs to (...)


    19. Re: 1000 Pages, 30,000 Views!

      Great job!! Thanks Had another 700 hits in the last 24hrs. I'd have been happy with 7 hits in total at one point!


    20. Re: Promote your story – but by only describing your protagonist

      A freed slave who becomes a knight...in a post apocalyptic atompunk wasteland