Experiment Zero

Experiment Zero

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    1. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      398 Friends, you say? Now I feel I’m intruding XD 


    2. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      We all need 5 Cloud, but if you double enter or double space you can make other characters invisibly.  Well, duh 🙄 me! 410


    3. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      412.. why do I need 5 characters, but you only 4, Cinn?



    4. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      how about: they are fluffy? I am fluffy!  420


    5. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      too much water in them ... yeah, but ... I don’t have a good argument. 420


    6. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      clouds are the enemies of birbs .... 420


    7. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      424 :P I thought we were friends!!  422 


    8. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      418 Birb is such a traitor! 


    9. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      420 I thought Cinn could use some support! 


    10. Re: Guys vs Girls counting game

      418 ... high time I joined in the fun! 


    11. Re: I'll read your first chapter. If I like it I will follow

      https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/39586/designation-first 


    12. Re: Free Comments on First Chapter

      Not sure if you’re sick of reading first chapters by now - but I’ll throw mine in the mix too... I’d be grateful for any level of feedback (here or in the comment under the chapter)  https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/39586/designation-first (...)


    13. Re: Suggestions for Improvement

      You are pretty convincing! I think the first thing I need to do is getting more written down and out of my head.  Think about my protagonist some more, and set a more solid progression for the storyline. (...)


    14. Re: Suggestions for Improvement

      Second, I'd say the worst part about your first chapter is that it starts in a sub-optimal place. It feels natural to start writing it when he wakes up, but that isn't a very interesting part for a reader. (...)


    15. Re: Suggestions for Improvement

      Thank you so much!  If you are seeking more review, you might turn on the reader suggestions (found in the edit fiction page, near the bottom save button).  It's new, but it is supposed to make commenting (...)


    16. Re: Suggestions for Improvement

      I have recently started writing and am a novice in pretty much every way imaginable.   There are some flaws I have noticed already, and I am planning on re-writing the first few chapters before I get (...)