StgBria

StgBria

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    1. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hello~ I'm a complete beginner when it comes to writing. I wanted to try third-pov so I created a fantasy story, though I don't know if it's good enough. Chapter 1 and 2 are edited by my friend who (...)


    2. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hello, this is my story. Thank you for any form of feedback https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/3edfbf6d-a535-4bd0-b1d1-0ffb0c38cce7/den7wzx-a80da77c-64fd-4ef2-91a5-a46ae9d04442.jpg/v1/fill/w_1280,h_1755,q_75,strp/a_hero_for_this_dragon_cover_by_brenoranyere_den7wzx-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.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.J5PHONQFTERx2QcP6jzDwwLcxfD4fNbBUkYwOJQut9A (...)


    3. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      @stg Got a certain letter from a certain ministry of defence to report for enlistment, so I'll have no way of taking up your offer of co writing. But if you want to use the premise for Cry Wolfe and (...)


    4. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hey there! Can I ask you to also read the first chapter of my story?  https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/44629/romantic-fantasy-adventure-of-saint-mom-lily/chapter/710184/prologue-the-birth-of-saint-mom-lily (...)


    5. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hey there! Can I ask you to also read the first chapter of my story?  https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/44629/romantic-fantasy-adventure-of-saint-mom-lily/chapter/710184/prologue-the-birth-of-saint-mom-lily (...)


    6. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hey there! I'm not sure if you're still doing these, but as a beginner writer your feedback is wonderfully detailed. I'd appreciate feedback on my first chapter as well! https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/44915/isekai-butler/chapter/715906/chapter-1-extremely-limited-power (...)


    7. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      This is a great idea; I think I'll follow this format myself to help others out. I'd appreciate it if you gave me your feedback on my first chapter for The Trials of the Lion, my fiction. If you do, (...)


    8. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Awakening: Prodigy Have fun!  Your sig looks like Yennefer. Anyway, would keep reading.  You hooked me right away with your beautiful descriptive prose. And you also had an exciting first chapter (...)


    9. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      You are amazing for continuing this for so long. If you wouldn't mind, I'll add mine too. Thank you very much. Would not keep reading.  In terms of fun and excitement I think the story works. In (...)


    10. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      I'm losing the bulk of the readers in the first 3 chaps, so you taking a look at the first is perfect. Chapter 1 - Beginning of a new Era - Maker Of Power | Royal Road   Would not keep reading.  (...)


    11. Re: How do you come up with a universe that hasn't been done before? And how do you create a whole story?

      You'll always end up with some elements or parts that share with other stories and universes, and that's not a bad thing. In fact, you probably should be inspired by things you experience and pull from (...)


    12. Re: Looking for Sci-fi meets Medieval

      Can you describe what you mean? I don't understand how something can be sci-fi and medival.


    13. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/44674/an-inheritance-of-dust-and-ash-salt-in-the-wound/chapter/711320/chapter-1-to-speak-ill-of-the-deadcael I skipped over the prologue because that is more background (...)


    14. Re: Revamp: I don't care how long your story is gimme gimme I will review it IN DEPTH

      Might as well sign up. You can review either Syche: The Dark Element or Reaper's Game. I don't really have a preference. In terms of what I'd like to get feedback on? I don't have any specific area of (...)


    15. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hey, I don't know if you're still doing it. However if you are, your feedback on my fiction below would be really appreciated. Hmmmm. I guess it's interesting enough to read one more chapter and (...)


    16. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      I'd like some feedback too if you're free, please. Here's the link, though it is the prologue, so unsure if you would want to read further: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/44396/legend-of-the-spellthief/chapter/705688/chapter-0-final-overtime (...)


    17. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Is there a place on the wagon for me too?   :PeoReading: Standardize the font, size, and bolding and get back to me. It's too hard on my eyes. 


    18. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Can I jump on the critique bandwagon? Just a warning, my chapters are relatively shorter than the *sweet spot* guidelines. Hmmm. Would not keep reading.  This one is pretty middle of the road in (...)


    19. Re: How to deal with negative comments/feedback on writing?

      Well the first thing we need to establish is that what you have isn't negative feedback. A .5 review, ESPECIALLY on RR, is a statement that they either dislike the person, or dislike the subject matter. (...)


    20. Re: Question to readers: Why assume stupidity when an explanation is not yet given?

      I feel like this one can go either way.  It's entirely possible you have readers who want everything up front and won't give your story the time of day.  However, it's also possible that you as the (...)