StgBria

StgBria

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    1. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      If you're still doing this I'd like to have a feedback too! My story is in my signature. Thank you in advance! Would keep reading.  This was very good. There were some technical issues, but it was (...)


    2. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hello there! If you have time, please read my first chapter! Will love to receive some feedback over it. Thank you.  Which one?


    3. Re: First Chapter Feedback/Reviews

      Option C:  Give me the most scathing, pedantic critique you can. Do itttt


    4. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Would not keep reading.  This is by no means a bad thumbs down. There's a lot going on I like and that you get right. But I have some problems with the prose (see examples below) and the general expostion (...)


    5. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      I will leave mine here to its fate. Would keep reading.  Did you submit this on my thread on scirbble hub by any chance? This feels super familiar. In any case, this is quite good. The prose is nice, (...)


    6. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Also posting my story in sig for a looksie! It's mostly setup, but still interested in your opinion. Thanks! Would keep reading.  The flow of action and general writing here is pretty fantastic. (...)


    7. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hello! While I'm not too sure in the quality of my first chapter from Of Blood and Stardust I'd love to get a second opinion on it! Thank you! Would not keep reading.  This is by no means a (...)


    8. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      I would so appreciate your feedback!  I am new to writing so I would love any pointers/tips! Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/58458/caught-in-an-echo/chapter/988100/chapter-1 Would keep (...)


    9. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      I will leave mine here to its fate. Would keep reading.  Did you submit this on my thread on scirbble hub by any chance? This feels super familiar. In any case, this is quite good. The prose is nice, (...)


    10. Re: Looking for Things to Review

      I did a follow up to my last read along. My next video will be a special themed episode for some RR novels from this thread.  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BxILR4mXbrk


    11. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Sorry if you're already packed with stories, I know this thread is super long. If you can get into it though, I'm especially curious as the prologue to my story is in the perspective of the antagonist, (...)


    12. Re: What do you think of fantasy covers in this style?

      I really despise it. I think if you're going to have a character on the front, it needs to be highly stylized otherwise it just looks like dime store trash. 


    13. Re: Desired End?

      What ending do you prefer to give to your story? A happy one? Open-ended? Tragic? What do like to see in a story you're invested in?  I like tragic endings, but I have yet to write one for any story (...)


    14. Re: Any writer here attempted or has created multiple stories in an interconnected universe

      I'm working on it. Or should I say, I just wiped the slate clean and started all over working on it.  My name is actually an allusion to a unifying magic system. And then each book will show how that (...)


    15. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Sorry if you're already packed with stories, I know this thread is super long. If you can get into it though, I'm especially curious as the prologue to my story is in the perspective of the antagonist, (...)


    16. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hi, you gave some great advice for a different story.  I was wondering if you would be so kind as to take a look at the first chapter of my Gamelit. First time with the genre and it would be incredibly (...)



    17. Re: Explain Like I'm Five; Semicolons

      A semicolon is a fancy period; you use it when you want the two sentences to be more closely related. 


    18. Re: 🔨 Constructive First Chapter Feedback 🔨

      Go ahead and hit me up for my prologue. There's a real question of style vs. clarity that I'm struggling with.  https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/58120/the-dark-element/chapter/981784/prologue-the-dying-dark (...)


    19. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hi, you gave some great advice for a different story.  I was wondering if you would be so kind as to take a look at the first chapter of my Gamelit. First time with the genre and it would be incredibly (...)