I'm hoping you can see this, unfortunately i am unaware of how to contact you directly.
I like your story. I have some editing skills, if you want me to try editing your work before it gets posted, I can do so. The one caveat is that I am new to ROYALROADL and I have no resume to speak of. But if you want to let me try, I can start by editing what you've already created and sending you the edits.