OntoSomethingGood

OntoSomethingGood

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    1. Re: Free First Chapter Feedback!

      Hi, This is another of my stories that I've been planning. Would appreciate some feedback if you can spare some time -  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nN2jRO242xkw2ZH4gvKGqa2jqwvBVwYJnyws5bOG1Gg/edit?usp=sharing


    2. Re: Lara P. Ambrose, Fantasy and Horror Writer!

      LAmbrose! Any connection with Lilly and Ambrose from the famed Storm and Silence? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€ Anyway, welcome to RR :) Haha I actually don't know what that is, sooo...I'll have to check it out, LOL! (...)


    3. Re: Lara P. Ambrose, Fantasy and Horror Writer!

      LAmbrose! Any connection with Lilly and Ambrose from the famed Storm and Silence? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€ Anyway, welcome to RR :)


    4. Re: Good romanceee

      I recently came across this and it is really good.  https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/41476/together Aww....thanks so much!! I am so glad you liked it enough to recommend it! :peoeyesparkle:  (...)


    5. Re: Need critical feedback

      Screw it why not. Since it's not a typical RR favorite, I'll go read it and give you feedback. Give me a week to read the full story. Ah, thatโ€™s great, thank you so much! Will look forward to your feedback๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š (...)


    6. Re: Need critical feedback

      I read your first chapter and found some spacing errors.  For example: "Mahek, this seems to be a good offer," Her father tried to reason. "We can buy something else in a better part of the city. (...)


    7. Re: Need critical feedback

      Hello, I need some critical feedback on my story. It's about 40 chapters gone (nearly 76k words). I have had some review swaps initially from which I got great feedback. But since then, the story has (...)



    8. Re: Writathon - did it help you?

      I got some extra views on the 6th of May, but they were considerably less than what I expected. A couple of extra follows and one additional favorite, but no major change. I'll wait and watch for a few (...)


    9. Re: What's the worst sentence you've ever written?

      "The pistol hit him with a bullet, causing him to die." Lol, that's hilarious.  For me, each of my sentences sounds lame. I'm not a native English speaker and the thought never leaves me that a (...)


    10. Re: Congo to all writathon winners Plus 100K words Plus 10K+ views

      Congrats to all, well deserved -:) I have been a reluctant participant but somehow made it past the finish line in time. So kudos to all and myself! :peoapproval:


    11. Re: 1000 Views on a single story!

      Excellent! :peoapproval:


    12. Re: Broke into top 2500!

      I know it's not much, but it's something! And I am sooo happpyyyyy :)))


    13. Re: Seven followers yeehaw

      Well done! Hope you get many more :)


    14. Re: My Very 1st Follow!

      Congrats! Hope you get many more :)


    15. Re: 50k+ Words and Over 200 Pages

      Excellent! Congrats :)


    16. Re: I just completed my first book!

      Congratulations!  :peoapproval:


    17. Re: Royal Road Identity Crisis

      A simple thumbs up/down system is vastly superior for ratings since it doesn't give an unfair edge to easily pleased and the easily annoyed, they should count just as little as everyone else.  I never (...)


    18. Re: Royal Road Identity Crisis

      I don't have all my eggs in one basket at all, I just care about all the baskets. The entire thing is... I want to keep posting on RR and have all my chapters (besides advance ones) for free on (...)


    19. Re: Royal Road Identity Crisis

      Every single 0.5-star anonymous rating is discouraging an author from writing. At least it makes me and so many others feel discouraged as fuck. Ok...so why is it going back to the current (...)