Zack Tan

Zack Tan

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The living dead

There is some grammatical errors

Characters are too skilled to fit into a zombie horror, which reminds me of highschool of the dead

Characters are annoying

A lot of unfitting and exaggerated situation. 

Such as logically who would knell down before someone else in this modern world?  What’s more the whole school before the headmaster? If this is the case everyone would be kneeling down before the richest or president already seriously. 

There are some minor wording and grammatical but mainly still readable  

 

Since somehow the rating feature is a bugged on my side, here is my rating

Overall: 3

Style: 3

Grammar: 4

Character: 2