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YOUR CHRACTERS DONT MAME ANY SENSE AND YOUR MAIN CRACHTER IS NOT EVEN USING HIS POWERS

1. Good grammer and looks interesting keep it up

(uP to 8) 

I Lo ve This Storey and you día charter 7and 8 perfectly

I like this story it has good Grammer flow and style  so 10/10 would read again

of all the stories on this site my favorite is this one its a Marginally New story the character makes sense to me in and the grammar is both great and spelled right so over all its a great story the only thing i can complain about is that the releases of chapters is slowish but that's made  up for with long chapters that progress the story so i can live with waiting a 10 days so in conclusion this story is great and i want the author to continue writing

I like the general idea and the Grammars good but cut back on the modern jocks like "420 blaze" it it really hurts your story

the title says it all keep up and youll be the very best and catch all the followers

I have to say this is very good concept and story i liked it

the story here is well written but you spend to MUCH DAMN TIME EXPLAINING my god  we dont need to know you spent 20+ Chapters IN A EGG bring in some plot already you've done nothing but dump info until this story actually has some sort of progression my Review stands

Ive not read a story with this style or one that focuses on the battle part of space the few  that  are like this don't focus on what this one focus on and truthfully in less than 10 chapters im already loving this one more so ya thanks

P.S- you have taken the spot of favorite author on  this site congrats AND I LOVE THIS THING