zdkazz

zdkazz

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    1. Re: Review swap!

      I didn't notice any glaring spelling mistakes; it was mostly a punctuation/sentence structure problem.cool thank you again!


    2. Re: Review swap!

      I left you a review. Hope it's helpful :)thanks for the review! I have a question, you mentioned grammar, was it just the punctuation or was it also spelling( so I know what to look for to fix) As (...)


    3. Re: Review swap!

      Haha, author's notes don't count, don't worry :p Here are some suggestions for your synopsis (changed the punctuation and syntax): The road is long, often dangerous, and almost always lonely. Yoseif (...)


    4. Re: Review swap!

      I shortened the synopsis to two paragraphs, its now just over 100 words long(the author’s note at the bottom doesn’t count right? Lol)


    5. Re: Review swap!

      Hey, I'll gladly review your story ! First advice: you might want to change your synopsis. It's a bit too long. I'm not going to lie, usually when stumble upon a story with a long synopsis, I don't (...)


    6. Re: Ya Know What? Go Ahead And Plug. Show Ya Stories

      Story genres: Romance, adventure Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/24991/echoes-of-esamir Synopsis:The road is long, often dangerous, and almost always lonely, as is the life of a landless (...)


    7. Re: Review swap!

      Hello everyone, I would like to do some review swaps/ get some feedback, I have been posting for a week but haven't seemed to get any sort of traction.  I have five chapters posted, almost 75 pages and (...)


    8. Re: Spice and wolf inspired Novel, would love some reviews...

      I couldn't agree more with your quality > quantity remark. Really looking forward to reading more. so, I rewrote the synopsis, what do you think of something like this? The road is long, often dangerous, (...)


    9. Re: Spice and wolf inspired Novel, would love some reviews...

      I couldn't agree more with your quality > quantity remark. Really looking forward to reading more.well I hope you liked my somewhat strange approach at some action lol, I took H.E.M.A.  classes for a (...)


    10. Re: Spice and wolf inspired Novel, would love some reviews...

      Thanks for reading and the feedback I will attempt to nail that synopsis down. Originally chapter 1 and 2 and part of three was a single chapter so that Yoseif met Sylvi in the first chapter but each (...)


    11. Re: Spice and wolf inspired Novel, would love some reviews...

      So, after reading through the three chapters you currently have up I'm going to say a few pros and a few easily fixable cons. Pros: 1. Your English, grammar, and spelling are excellent.  A lot (...)


    12. Re: RoyalRoad#101 - Free Reviews each Sunday.

      Well if it is still open I would love a review, so far I have three chapters and just under 50 pages, each of my chapters tend to be 3,000 to 5,000 words,so read what you want, thank you for this opportunity! (...)


    13. Re: Spice and wolf inspired Novel, would love some reviews...

      Will give it a read, I love Spice and Wolf.as do I my friend as do I. Thanks in advance!


    14. Re: Spice and wolf inspired Novel, would love some reviews...

      Hello everyone, I used to write on here years ago(About four)  and I had a small following, but I quit due to Irl stuff, you know how it goes...  anyway about four years ago I started writing a novel called (...)


    15. Re: Feedback on my cover?

      Well I ended up using the second cover, I think it looks better, I posted the novel last night, hopefully it gets approved sometime today, I have several chapters ready to go and am really enjoying reworking (...)


    16. Re: Feedback on my cover?

      XD You're not the best in Photoshop?  But still you made and awesome cover. Me in the other hand, it's hard to draw my Chapter Six. well, I had good photos to work with, and all I did was add the text (...)


    17. Re: Feedback on my cover?

      Thank you everyone for the feedback! I am not the best with photoshop lol so I did a redesign with a different photo and just a few tweaks in photoshop lol what about this one? Or should I stick with the (...)


    18. Re: Feedback on my cover?

      Just a couple of short notes: The colour composition is great with warm colours, as are the calligraphic florals on the edges. There are some problems you can fix and others that would require more extensive (...)


    19. Re: Feedback on my cover?

      Just a couple of short notes: The colour composition is great with warm colours, as are the calligraphic florals on the edges. There are some problems you can fix and others that would require more extensive (...)


    20. Re: Feedback on my cover?

      https://i.imgur.com/3oAobce.jpg So, a long time ago(about two years or so) I wrote a little fiction inspired by spice and wolf and traditional medieval tales that focused on romance and historical accuracy(I (...)