O_Weaver

O_Weaver

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    1. Re: pls need a honest opinion

      You need a synopsis to draw people in. Its okay for a synopsis to include some spoilers, as long as you don't tell readers the entire plot. I agree you should work on your grammar a bit. There are quite (...)


    2. Re: Would my story be acceptable for the litRPG tag?

      The proponents of the term state that in LitRPG, games or game-like challenges form an essential part of the story, and visible RPG statistics (for example strength, intelligence, damage) are a significant (...)


    3. Re: Need help with the intro

      Just a heads up, those two shades of blue text are hard to read on the "light" version of the website.


    4. Re: How is this follow and view count possible

      It could be for any number of reasons. Maybe they have a lot of the popular genres ticked, or maybe they have their story cross posted on multiple sites. Maybe they have a good cover for the story which (...)


    5. Re: Help picking ideas please

      I think the first idea could be very interesting. There are a lot of stories out there about a murder hobo waking up in a new world and just blowing shit up, but following a bard on an adventure would (...)


    6. Re: Is Truck-kun of Isekai fame an Autobot or a Decepticon? Discuss.

      Truck-kun been busy https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e1IvzZMSaIc


    7. Re: Huge plothole in book and I'm completely devastated.

      I know how this feels. I got pretty far into my current project recently and was writing an action-ish scene and then realized I did something dumb... I forgot to give the characters weapons in the (...)


    8. Re: What game inspires you to write the most?

      The Legend of Zelda series. From the original 2-d games to Breath of the Wild, the player goes on an adventure to kill the bad guy and often save the princess, but if you think about it, its actually a (...)


    9. Re: Why aren't people reading on?

      So, checking out your chapter, first thing I noticed is that your formatting needs changed. .. A lot of readers are turned off by large, blocky paragraphs, so just adding some spaces between (...)


    10. Re: How much depth do you put into your stories?

      yet Is this foreshadowing? :peoeyesparkle: :DrakanThink:


    11. Re: what is fanfiction?

      If you include any part of another original work that you did not create yourself, its fanfiction. Borrowing even just the "location" (especially if that location isn't a common place and is unique (...)


    12. Re: Why aren't people reading on?

      So, checking out your chapter, first thing I noticed is that your formatting needs changed. For novels published online, its best to have a space between each paragraph, because without someway to indicate (...)


    13. Re: How much depth do you put into your stories?

      I like to write in unassuming, unimportant looking "hints" in my current project (not listed on RR yet). There's no profound, deep meaning, but I think its fun to toss in a single line describing a mundane (...)


    14. Re: People Who Write Well are Jerks Who Make Life Harder for the Rest of Us.

      From how high must the story be dropped? And is chunky a bad thing? :peoconfused:


    15. Re: What do you do when you suddenly can't write?

      ...The problem isn't that you can't write. The problem is that you're judging yourself and holding yourself to an impossible standard. If you can't write something good, then give yourself permission (...)


    16. Re: what is fanfiction?

      If you include any part of another original work that you did not create yourself, its fanfiction. Borrowing even just the "location" (especially if that location isn't a common place and is unique to (...)


    17. Re: a little help is needed

      I think you really need to be careful about printing books written by other authors. I'm not sure some authors would be comfortable knowing their written work has already been copied down and turned into (...)


    18. Re: Does having a lot of dialogues drops the quality of your novel?

      Its not really the amount of dialogue, but the contents of the dialogue itself that can possibly lower the quality of someone's work. For example, if your dialogue is stiff, robotic, uninteresting, or (...)


    19. Re: Is Truck-kun of Isekai fame an Autobot or a Decepticon? Discuss.

      It's hard to guess for sure, but Truck-kun is definitely a transformer that is being used by a Quintesson to alleviate its boredom. Quintessons have multiple personalities, and I suspect they are pretending (...)


    20. Re: Have You Ever Wondered If Your Lustrous, Radiant Hair is Harming your Story?

      Your beautiful hair has inspired me. We need a new genre of "hair" isekai litrpg's. Reborn as the Hero's Radiant Hair Pantene System Isekai'd at the Roots! The Conditioned Hero Apocalyptic (...)