emperor yair

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    1. Re: How to avoid a forced plot?

      several people here misidentified what"forced plot" is. this is not contrived plot like LJ McEachern explained. and this is not what CKJ5 described ( deus ex macina, and ass-pull.) forced plot is (...)


    2. Re: The xianxia trope thingamabob

      I do not see anything about "spitting out a mouthful of blood". Isn't that in every xiaxia? When angry -> Spit blood. When cultivation fails -> Spit blood. I can't remember any other reasons (...)


    3. Re: Anyone up for giving me some feedback on my magic system? (DO NOT USE!)

      this isnt much as a magic system/ its more of how to people gain superpowers in your story. this is basically background lore, so no real opinion can be given as you did not show how it interact with (...)


    4. Re: need assistance at flashing out a female lead (as well as a story synopsis)

      Ah, ok. Sorry my advice missed the mark the first time round, I'll give it another crack though. So you're looking for a flaw that is a positive character trait, taken to the extreme, that causes problems (...)


    5. Re: need assistance at flashing out a female lead (as well as a story synopsis)

      So without giving concrete 'I think you should do this' advice, which I don't think is very helpful a lot of the time (you have a much more in depth and complex vision for your work than I would, so how (...)


    6. Re: Should I focus on the numbers or care more about telling a story?

      here is a tip: don't write exp gain and such. when the story FEELS like its time for the MC to level, then level him then. try to avoid putting  to much things you need to track. later in the story, (...)


    7. need assistance at flashing out a female lead (as well as a story synopsis)

      i am making a story and need assistance at flashing out the female lead. the character is on the surface a kind of a wish fulfillment "anime" female lead (a female version of knight in shining armor), (...)


    8. Re: Favorite Indie Game?

      my fav indie games: amazing cultivator simulator crosscode nova drift scroll of taiwu orb of creation


    9. Re: LitRPG

      Do the majority of people who read this genre actually love this aspect of it? Yes. Yes No. stats and numbers are just a way to show progress in a system. you can easly make a system that dont (...)


    10. Re: i have just found the world longest book novel tile

      I had a phase where all I read was shoujo-ish villainess noble girls light novels, Oh? If you're still up for one, I actually just read a really funny one. Its called It's got two TLed volumes (...)


    11. Re: i have just found the world longest book novel tile

      https://i.postimg.cc/5yyLTQ6Y/25a201cc0d7e9e174e691e2dde3affbb.jpg (I once read that the length of light novel titles is to increase visibility. Japanese posting sites don't display a summary or a cover, (...)


    12. i have just found the world longest book novel tile

      i have just found the world longest book novel tile: Exiled in a Class Trial for “Poor Dexterity”. Because He Was Dexterous, He Lived on His Own. Because of His Dexterity, He Was Able to Use All the (...)


    13. Re: LITRPG based off Gacha Games

      Trash skill Gacha first part is ok, and feels like gacha, but then it gets bad you can find it at novel updates


    14. Re: That one character that ruins the entire story.

      You can't have this kind of thread without the OG of, "Oh, god, it's another episode focused entirely on that little prick. Skip!" Wesley Crusher. i never had a problem with Wesley for some reason. (...)


    15. Re: That one character that ruins the entire story.

      i didn't hate jarjar when i watched it in cinema when it first came out. i was expecting it to still be kind of a kids movie like the original. if anything, anakin was worse because he was to small to (...)


    16. Re: Does anyone else feel like the Wuxia tag is being misused often?

      you know, you could, like, exclude tags from search, man, and, like, do +wuxia -xianxia Idk, maybe, you can find like that a, like, a wuxia story, man... I'm confused by this statement. It wouldn't (...)


    17. Re: Does anyone else feel like the Wuxia tag is being misused often?

      you know, you could, like, exclude tags from search, man, and, like, do +wuxia -xianxia Idk, maybe, you can find like that a, like, a wuxia story, man...


    18. Re: What's your favorite kind of system for a LitRPG?

      the kind of system that i like is one is one that is very very deep. i HATE simple systems or ones that the author didn't invest in. if i have to see one more time stupid stuff like survival skill or (...)


    19. Re: question on weapon skills

      i dont like specific weapon skills. there are to much types its not fun to read. skills need to be interesting, and to much mundane skills is just boring. general weapon skills better since (...)


    20. Re: Magician or Sorcerer?

      i'm also non native english speaker, but here is my 2 cents, according to my experience with to all the books i read. mage - its what i would call someone who cast spells like its a rpg game. its also (...)