Gridinad

Gridinad

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A Sense for magic

It reminds me of "The Name of the Wind" but a lighter story. I can't wait to see how the autbor develops the world and magic system. I do like how Vance's durability isn't shown as being nullified by hia extra sense and is still hindering him. I binged this in an afternoon and I can't wait for more.


Deshawn Dale and the Hidden World

I'm not a good reviewer so I will be brief.

D.D. and The Hidden World

It's good. Ben definitely has a plan for this and isn't struggling with the first person writing style as much as I would have.  The formatting is wonderful and dialogue is easy to follow. 

However, it is in first person POV which can be a deal breaker for some people. The grammar is good with hardly any errors, but there are a few that only stand out if you look for them. 

If you like young adult fantasy, and a coming of age story, you will probably want ti give this a go. I'm interested to see where Ben takes this story.

 


Artificial Jelly

I love this story, the pacing is phenomenal and Materia Blade knows how to put emotion into her characters qnd thier dialogue. I heartily recommend it to anyone.


There is no Epic Loot here, Only Puns.

This story is amazing, good puns and heart warming moments. Will recommend to everyone.